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poem: Love,Lost

Updated on September 8, 2015

Love, Lost

At night I felt your eye sight.
The first touch
was, so eloquent.
Our hands lock
passion spread
throughout the
bed sheets.
Heavy breathing
conjures up.
Suddenly
we drift
apart.
Blind to
each others
Love.

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    • Luna Blue profile image

      Luna Blue 2 years ago

      Great piece, my favorite part "Blind to each other's love" I know this well!

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      Gypsy Rose Lee 2 years ago from Riga, Latvia

      Nicely penned!

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      FlourishAnyway 2 years ago from USA

      Beautifully written

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      Bronwen Scott-Branagan 2 years ago from Victoria, Australia

      Sad, but I guess that's life! Interesting poem.

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      Ann Carr 2 years ago from SW England

      Suddenly so sad and one wonders why. Lots of emotions in so few words.

      Nice one.

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