Possible
I picked a daisy~
One by one~
Petals do I slowly pluck~
With every pedal I wonder~
With every pedal I dream~
Has my life gone a’ muck?
Possible~
In real life~
I wonder? ~
How your persona would feel? ~
As a bed of roses? ~
With no thorns? ~
Where only at your death~
Would I be forlorn?
I passed the sun flowers~
All in a row~
One by one~
I saw black seeds~
As the yellow petals~
Circled them~
As they do tall grow.
Possible~
When dejected by another~
That is when I dream~
Of you even more. ~
Being realistic~
At this time my psyche~
Can not though conquer~
The tempting thoughts in droves.
Now the summer nearly gone~
The sun tempered~
As I yearn~
For the soothing rays~
To never fade~
Although in life~
I think I have been greatly burned.
Possible~
Conversations in which we have~
Flow so easily~
Our ideologies are so alike~
Soft our personalities surge~
Light and breezy as they flock~
How we do meld~
Like no others about.
As the thunder breaks the silence~
With the sky grey and gloomy~
I feel the struggle of~
Cold against the heat~
I reach as quick’ sand has~
Engulfed my feet.
Possible? ~
Scared~
I wonder over and over again~
If circumstances were different? ~
Are you my intended soul mate? ~
Am I possibly neglecting to listen~
To the ultimate VOICE? ~
As I worry~
At some point all things that could had been~
Might happen maybe too late~
In the end?
By
Lisa J. Warner
AKA
Lisa Luv
CopyRight9/12/2013@LisaLuvLLC
Comments
Life with no thorns will certainly be boring. We may abhor challenges, conflicts, and difficulties in life, but these things make life worth living.
This is such a beautiful poem.Thanks for sharing.
Pedals should be petals throughout the poem other than that it is very nice
What an amazing and beautiful set of poems, Lisa. I love them so much. I love your breezy effortless writing style. You have the gift with words, and so full of passion and resonance.
My I very politely and respectfully suggest a small change. The word Pedal and Petal are different. I think you mean the latter and please accept my apologies for this. It did not detract from the enjoyment of your wonderful writing. And if you want to delete this comment - I understand.
I love your poetry. Bless you.
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Astra Nomik ----Oh thank you Astra Nomik I do not mind at all and I will have to check that out and change it if need be...I think the problem is how I pronounce it when speaking... But I will change it, and would rather know than not...I really appreciate your help... Thank you so much again... HUGS!
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Astra Nomik ---You were right on! It was petals I wanted... ! I corrected the 2 places I think that needed fixing... If you notice ever anything else please do not hesitate to correct me... again thank you!!!!
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Vinaya Ghimire &Nikkij504gurl~~~~Thank you both for the read... and I have corrected the errors, and hopefully caught them all... I appreciate the great feed back !
A beautiful collection of poems here... The thoughts of whether you have met your soul mate are so romantic, Lisa.
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Thank You ChristyWrites... and a Very Happy Friday Night to You!
Oh so truly beautiful Lisa.
Voting up and sharing onto A Brand New Dawn.
Have a wonderful weekend Lisa.
Eddy.
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Eiddwen~~~Thank You!!! ENJOY every bit of your weekend!
Beautiful Lisa, I think you expressed the emotions well.
Mark
There can be so much going on in one's life, but to recognize and question--like you do--truly is a gift. Dream on, walk on, Lisa, for there is so much yet to see...
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Oh ---such wise encouraging words.. Thank You aviannovice....May you have a wonderful day!
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Curiad Thank you so much for taking the time to read, and your very kind comment... Enjoy your Sunday!
What a lovely poem on the what makes life's passing meaningful. The summer's heat does burn our lives with many memories.
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Thank You teaches12345~~~~ May you have a wonderful day!
Very nice and pleasant, hopeful poem!
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blondey Thank you so much... Blessings....
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