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she always was a deep sleeper

Updated on July 28, 2013
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Justin W. Price, AKA PDXKaraokeGuy, is a freelance writer, blogger, and award-nominated author based out of Juneau, Alaska.

*disclaimer: This poem was written about six years ago when i was going through a divorce. I am currently in a happy, loving marriage.This poem was just a cathartic release for me. Hopefully it will help you, if you need it. It is also a song. if you would like a copy, drop me an e mail.







Rejection is like

an ice shower in the Arctic:
Cold uncomfortable
makes me sick so sick
makes me wish i was dead
Makes me feel unable

Makes it so hard to move on
Makes it so hard to work and live and sleep
Make me feel so useless
Makes my whole body

hurt

Perception is in

the eyes of the one who percieves
In this case it's me
and I percieve in you
a longing to be free
away from me
and onto another
i won't step on your toes
but i can't

let you leave

I'm running out of pebbles and

out of time
I'm running out of ways to win you back
I'm running out of pebbles on the edge of night
I'm running out of windows no more

panes to crack


Thanks for Reading.

A FREELANCE WRITER, HONORS STUDENT AND GOVER PRIZE FINALIST, JUSTIN W. PRICE (AKA, PDXKARAOKEGUY)IS A POET, SHORT STORY, BIOGRAPHY AND HUMOR WRITER. HIS POETRY COLLECTION, DIGGING TO CHINA, WAS RELEASED FEBRUARY 2ND, 2013 BY SWEATSHOPPE PUBLICATIONS AND IS AVAILABLE ON AMAZON.COM, BARNES AND NOBLE AND THROUGH YOUR LOCAL BOOKSELLER.

HIS WORK WILL ALSO BE FEATURED IN BEST NEW Writing (2014 EDITION), AND HAS APPEARED PREVIOUSLY IN THE RUSTY NAIL, EFICTION, THE CRISIS CHRONICLES, THE HELLROARING REVIEW, BURNINGWORD, THE WHISTLING FIRE, SEE SPOT RUN ANDTHE BELLWETHER REVIEW.

HE WORKS AS A FREELANCE WRITER, EDITOR, AND GHOST WRITER, AND IS WORKING TOWARDS HIS PH.D. HE LIVES IN A SUBURB OF PORTLAND, OREGON WITH HIS WIFE, ANDREA, THEIR LABRADOODLE, BELLA, SCHNOODLE, SAUVEE AND BLACK MOOR GOLDFISH, HOWARD WOLOWITZ.

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      Justin W Price 3 years ago from Juneau, Alaska

      Thanks a lot, Victoria. I appreciate that!

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      Victoria Lynn 3 years ago from Arkansas, USA

      I love this poem, Justin--the repetition, the descriptions. It's great. :-)

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      Justin W Price 4 years ago from Juneau, Alaska

      Thanks Neny. I'm pleased that enjoyed this!

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      nenytridiana 4 years ago from Probolinggo - Jawa Timur - Indonesia

      Great poem, and I was spending a great time by reading this. Thank you PDXKaraokeGuy.

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      Justin W Price 4 years ago from Juneau, Alaska

      Thanks Victoria. this time si now a distant memory...

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      Victoria Lynn 4 years ago from Arkansas, USA

      Great outlet and expression for a tough time. I enjoy your poetry.

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      Justin W Price 5 years ago from Juneau, Alaska

      Thanks onlooker. It was the first song I wrote start for finish about about a five year drought

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      onlooker 5 years ago

      Another interesting poem/song. I can almost hear you rocking it =) This bird if free...voted up!

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      Justin W Price 5 years ago from Juneau, Alaska

      Thanks Acaetnna. Some of my best work came out of that time. I'm thankful I had an outlet to get out some of those emotions!

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      acaetnna 5 years ago from Guildford

      This must have been such a difficult time for you, but because of this experience you were able to write this wonderful poem. I am so pleased that you have found love again; love, true love, is such a wonderful thing.

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      newday98033 5 years ago

      Nice!

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      Justin W Price 5 years ago from Juneau, Alaska

      thanks so much audrey. I'm a great place now, but I wrote this, certainly at my low point. Thanks for stopping by!

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      Audrey Howitt 5 years ago from California

      This must have been a tough time and a tough write--really so well done--form is great--word choice is great--loved it!

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      Justin W Price 5 years ago from Juneau, Alaska

      Thanks, Jacqui. This poem was part of the healing process, certainly!

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      jacqui2011 5 years ago from Leicester, United Kingdom

      Glad you are happy now and have got over this emotional time in your life. Great poem.

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      Justin W Price 5 years ago from Juneau, Alaska

      Thanks for stopping by Uban. I'm very blessed that I have the gift of writing to help me cope with painful things. I pity those who don't have an outlet

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      Alexander Thandi Ubani 5 years ago from Lagos

      A grea piece of poetry. Sad as it may be but written with so much emotion and taste. Awesome and beautiful, I voted. Glad to know you have found peace & love. Be blessed

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