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67 "Miracle of Our Love"- a poem

Updated on April 14, 2013

Love will keep you warm.


Miracle of Our Love



When there is snow on the ground,

And there is snow all around,

I long for your head on my shoulder.



When the skies are clear and blue,

My mind is only on you,

And I never want to get any older.


All the days that we are apart,

You will always hold my heart,

You keep me from getting any colder.


Your love makes me brave and strong,

With you in my life nothing can go wrong,

You take my hand and I always feel bolder.


When finally our lives become one,

Together we will enjoy the sun,

And I will forever be your holder.

Greg


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      Uzma Shaheen Bhatti 5 years ago from Lahore,Pakistan

      beautiful poem.

      "When finally our lives become one,

      Together we will enjoy the sun,

      And I will forever be your holder."

      liked these optimistic line.

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      Greg Schweizer 5 years ago from Corona, California.

      H Uzma, Thank you. I like when I say something that someone likes and they point it out. Greg

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      Zulma Burgos-Dudgeon 5 years ago from United Kingdom

      This is so sweet and heartfelt.

      Oh...now you've made me go all misty-eyed. Totally ruins the reputation.

      Seriously, it's a lovely poem.

      Voted Up, beautiful. Socially shared.

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      Greg Schweizer 5 years ago from Corona, California.

      Hi Phoenix, Thamk you. I just try to write from my heart and I have a women that gives me inspiration and encouragement that you wouldn't believe. Greg

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      breakfastpop 5 years ago

      What a tender and beautiful piece.

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      KatrineDalMonte 5 years ago

      Oh Greg it's beautiful. Yes, love is the miracle of life, it's a gift. Wonderfully said :-)

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      Greg Schweizer 5 years ago from Corona, California.

      Hi BP, comming from you I take that as a real compliment. Greg

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      Greg Schweizer 5 years ago from Corona, California.

      Hi Katrine, Thank you. I love a woman's point of view. My poems are always written for the woman I love and she always says they are wonderful. But then, I do believes she loves me too. It's nice when I get a compliment from another woman. Greg

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      Ruby Jean Fuller 5 years ago from Southern Illinois

      Beautiful. never grow older, That's love...Bravo.

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      b. Malin 5 years ago

      Lovely Poem Greg, from the depth of your Heart...the Love shines through, so Beautifully.

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      Greg Schweizer 5 years ago from Corona, California.

      Hi Ruby, Thank you. As the old saying goes, " I may be getting older, but I refuse to grow up". Young at heart forever. Greg

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      Greg Schweizer 5 years ago from Corona, California.

      Hi Malin, Thank you. As long as she keeps seeing my love shine through. She hasn't given up on me yet and I doubt she ever will. Greg

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      Joyce Haragsim 5 years ago from Southern Nevada

      Wonderful heartfelt poem, voted up and beautiful, Joyce.

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      Dianna Mendez 5 years ago

      What a beautiful poem! I love the romantic flow of the verses and the thought that together can be a forever dream.

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      Greg Schweizer 5 years ago from Corona, California.

      Hi Joyce, Thank you for the comment and the vote. Greg

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      Greg Schweizer 5 years ago from Corona, California.

      Hi Teach, Thank you. I prefer poetry with a flowing rythem too. Greg

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      flashmakeit 5 years ago from usa

      That was so pretty Gregas

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      Greg Schweizer 5 years ago from Corona, California.

      Hi Fish, Thank you. Pretty is as pretty does and she deserves pretty. Greg

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      Gracenduta 5 years ago from Kenya

      Nice love poem

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      Greg Schweizer 5 years ago from Corona, California.

      Hi Grace, Thank you for the visit and comment. Greg

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      Eliza57 5 years ago

      Very beautiful. Comes from the bottom of your heart.......she must be a very lovely and special lady.

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      Greg Schweizer 5 years ago from Corona, California.

      Hi Eliza, Thank you. Yes, she is a lovely and very special lady. Greg

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      The Frog Princess 5 years ago from Florence area of the Great Pee Dee of South Carolina

      Such a well written poem. Brings peace to my heart.

      Donna

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      Greg Schweizer 5 years ago from Corona, California.

      Hi Donna, Thank you for the kind and heart warming compliment. Greg

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      rowley14t 5 years ago

      Thank you Greg, for sharing this poem. It has reminded me, as I am constantly reminded, of the love I have for the one who inspires my life and my creativity.

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      Justin W Price 5 years ago from Juneau, Alaska

      beautiful work, Greg, well done

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      Greg Schweizer 5 years ago from Corona, California.

      Hi Rowley, Thank you. I know the inspiration really helps. And she does encourage. Greg

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      Greg Schweizer 5 years ago from Corona, California.

      Hi Guy, Thank you very much for yhe comment. Greg

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      Subhas 5 years ago from New Delhi, India

      The most beautiful way of reminding how we human beings are bestowed with this great emotion and we have nailed it. A simply great hub.

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      Greg Schweizer 5 years ago from Corona, California.

      Hi Pinto, Thank you. It is a great emotion. If only more people would show that feeling. Greg

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      Deb Hirt 5 years ago from Stillwater, OK

      Very well said, Greg. You're a deep thinker, I see.

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      Greg Schweizer 5 years ago from Corona, California.

      Hi Avian, Thank you. It's not hard to think deep when you have the time to really let your mind go. Luckily, right now I have just that with my real inspiration in California. Greg

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      Kamalesh050 5 years ago from Sahaganj, Dist. Hooghly, West Bengal, India

      Enjoyed the poem. It's absolutely Wonderful. You have written this love poem with a lot of feelings from your deep inside!

      Thanks for sharing. Voted Up & Awesome.

      Best Wishes, Kamalesh

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      Greg Schweizer 5 years ago from Corona, California.

      Hi Kamalesh, Thank you. I am glad you enjoyed it and thank you for the votes. Greg

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      Ruth McCollum 5 years ago from Lake Oswego, Oregon

      That was so beautiful. Really. Great hub!

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      Greg Schweizer 5 years ago from Corona, California.

      Hi Rusti, Thank you for the lovely comment. Greg

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      BeyondMax 5 years ago from Sydney, Australia

      How loving and heart-warming, beautifully written!

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      Greg Schweizer 4 years ago from Corona, California.

      Hi BMax, Thank you very much. Greg

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      sheilanewton 4 years ago from North Shields, UK

      Voted up - this is awesome - and beautiful. Thank you for a great read.

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      Madeleine Salin 4 years ago from Finland

      Beautiful!

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      Bonitaanna 4 years ago from Oil City, PA

      Thank you Greg, That is very beautiful and very emotional for one who loves poetry. Not many men understand how deep are the beautiful words that can touch a womans heart. Keep writing them, you are a rare jewel!

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      Greg Schweizer 4 years ago from Corona, California.

      Hi Sheila, Thank you for the visit and the vote, and thanke toe the vote. Greg

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      Greg Schweizer 4 years ago from Corona, California.

      Hi Made, The you for the visit. Greg

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      Greg Schweizer 4 years ago from Corona, California.

      Hi Bonita, Thank you for the very encouraging comment. Greg

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      Sueswan 4 years ago

      Hi Gregas

      "All the days that we are apart,

      You will always hold my heart,

      You keep me from getting any colder."

      Sweet, tender and so romantic.

      Voted up and away!

      Enjoy your weekend. :)

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      Jessee R 4 years ago from Gurgaon, India

      "And I will forever be your holder"

      Beautiful expression of love...

      Great poetry my friend

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      shalini sharan 4 years ago from Delhi

      beautiful poem

      truly brings out your love for your beloved. touches my heart :)

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      Jackie Lynnley 4 years ago from The Beautiful South

      Very beautiful, sorry I missed this. Voting up.

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      denden mangubat 3 years ago from liloan, cebu, philippines

      romantic

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      April Dawn Meyer 3 years ago from Belle Fourche, South Dakota

      Gorgeous! Thanks for posting. Voted up :)

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      Kenneth C Agudo 3 years ago from Tiwi, Philippines

      Such a beautiful poem =)

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      Deborah Morrison 2 years ago from Hamilton, Ontario, Canada

      Lovely poem and perfect for this winter season ... romantic and heart-warming.

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      Deborah Morrison 2 years ago from Hamilton, Ontario, Canada

      A lovely poem, and does keep you warm on a cold winter's day.

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