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New Hub - Second Hub needs Help :)

  1. amzill profile image60
    amzillposted 8 years ago

    Please take a look at my second hub - it'a about car boot sales (like garage or yard sales but on a grander scale)

    http://www.hubpages.com/CarBootSales

    Let me know anything that needs fixed; could be improved - or whatever your feelings about it are.  Feel free to give honest feedback and criticism.

    Amzill

    1. ProCW profile image81
      ProCWposted 8 years ago in reply to this

      First criticism... smile

      when you type your URL here, you'll need to include "/hub" prior to your "CarBootSales" and just after "http://www.hubpages.com/"

      like so...

      http://hubpages.com/hub/CarBootSales

      and...

      WELCOME!

      ProCW

  2. amzill profile image60
    amzillposted 8 years ago

    Oops *blush*

    OK:  here it is again:

    http://hubpages.com/hub/CarBootSales


    Thanks

    1. ProCW profile image81
      ProCWposted 8 years ago in reply to this

      You're welcome!

      Looking forward to seeing some of writing skills tied to your directing and/or acting skills! smile

      ProCW

  3. Reynolds_Writing profile image85
    Reynolds_Writingposted 8 years ago

    I reviewed your hub and left a comment. For a second hub I thought it looked great. Interesting topic, good content, pictures/videos/ads.

    As someone who had never heard of one before.. I would start the hub with a more concrete simple definition of what is a Car Boot Sale- earlier in the content.

    Other than that, nice job

  4. amzill profile image60
    amzillposted 8 years ago

    Thanks for those comments, I'll see what I can do.

    My sincere thanks

    Amzill

 
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