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I'd like feedback on my Hub: Was Saint Tukaram murdered?

  1. sanjay-sonawani profile image56
    sanjay-sonawaniposted 21 months ago

    Hi Hubbers,

    I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my Hub Was Saint Tukaram murdered?. What can I do to improve? Thanks!

    1. SouradipSinha profile image85
      SouradipSinhaposted 21 months ago in reply to this

      You can do the following to improve the hub-
      1. You may Divide the article into parts such as a short introduction (Title - WHO WAS SAINT TUKARAM?), his life and actions, the challenges he posed to the Brahmins, the conspiracy theory about his death, etc
      2. You may Create another capsule for the 'expert comments' about who said what, etc
      3. I am of the opinion that there's a gap of logic in believing that his soul rose to heaven and all that. So, there remains a valid ground for suspecting his enemies. So, you may create another capsule for your opinion with logical explaination.
      Thanks,
      Souradip Sinha.

      1. sanjay-sonawani profile image56
        sanjay-sonawaniposted 21 months ago in reply to this

        Thanks Sourdip ji. This is helpful.

        1. SouradipSinha profile image85
          SouradipSinhaposted 21 months ago in reply to this

          Are Sir mujhe ji mat kahiye. Me ap se bohot chota hu big_smile
          Pranam lena smile

 
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