I'd like feedback on my Hub: My JourneyTo The World Within

  1. Vandana Patel profile image56
    Vandana Patelposted 19 months ago

    Hi Hubbers,

    I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my Hub My JourneyTo The World Within. What can I do to improve? Thanks!

    1. calculus-geometry profile image86
      calculus-geometryposted 19 months ago in reply to this

      You're missing a space between two words in the title. Your poem is written in bold font, change it to normal font.

  2. Chriswillman90 profile image92
    Chriswillman90posted 19 months ago

    It is a nice poem so kudos for that. I've seen a lot of poems on here use a variety of images to emphasize them, so perhaps you could include a couple more images relating to the poem.

 
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