I'd like feedback on my Hub: Asian Barred Owlet at Bangphar Non-Hunting Area Cho

  1. relache profile image86
    relacheposted 23 months ago

    "The underside of the fuselage is white and white vertical striped long haul up the chest a mess."

    No part of an owl is a fuselage.  You either need to learn more about owls or more about writing in English.

    1. WriteAngled profile image91
      WriteAngledposted 23 months ago

      "The author are visited this area several times until one day I have lucky time to meet with the robber, escape the hot sun under trees and still stand so that a stump, it has only head turn around."

      Have you put an existing article through spinner software to get results like this?
      Spun articles are not permitted here.