I'd like feedback on my Hub: Appreciating Your Pastor With Prayer

  1. D L Roderick profile image82
    D L Roderickposted 22 months ago

    Hi Hubbers,

    I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my Hub Appreciating Your Pastor With Prayer. What can I do to improve? Thanks!

  2. Peter Grujic profile image88
    Peter Grujicposted 22 months ago

    In general, it is very good. The topic certainly fits with the categories. I think you should proofread a little more. For example, you said Red Sox 'are'- it should be Red Sox 'is' because Red Sox, as used here, is a team- a single unit- therefore singular. Example 2: you write baseball has 'their pastime'- it should read 'it's pastime' since baseball is a regular noun, not a pronoun. I would also recommend making it a little bigger/longer. I go through my articles on a regular basis and many times find "mistakes" I missed when I proofread it. These are only suggestions, I am no expert by any means- keep up the great job - everything in life is a learning experience no matter how accomplished we may be. Good luck!