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I'd like feedback on my Hub: Do you really need managed WordPress hosting?

  1. heyashutosh profile image60
    heyashutoshposted 15 months ago

    Hi Hubbers,

    I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my Hub Do you really need managed WordPress hosting? (must be signed in to view). What can I do to improve? Thanks!

    1. theraggededge profile image95
      theraggededgeposted 15 months ago in reply to this

      Having had a quick look, I'd say you are overdoing it with the keywords. Can you find another way to say 'managed Wordpress hosting'? For example, in your image capsule, the title is 'Do you really need managed Wordpress hosting?', it is repeated on the image, then repeated again on the caption.

      You go on to use it in almost every sentence in the next portion of text, alternating with 'shared Wordpress hosting'. It looks a little spammy.

      There are also some English grammar issues that need fixing.

      I'd say rework the text so it sounds more natural and try again.

      Good luck.

      1. heyashutosh profile image60
        heyashutoshposted 15 months ago in reply to this

        Thanks so much for your valuable suggestions. Will recheck it.

        Thanks,
        Ashutosh

        1. theraggededge profile image95
          theraggededgeposted 15 months ago in reply to this

          Don't linkdrop in the forum or you'll be banned.

          1. heyashutosh profile image60
            heyashutoshposted 15 months ago in reply to this

            Removed. Thanks!

  2. Marisa Wright profile image93
    Marisa Wrightposted 15 months ago

    I was actually interested in the subject matter but I felt you didn't answer the question.  You said it could be worth it for some people but failed to explain WHY.

  3. Barbara Kay profile image85
    Barbara Kayposted 15 months ago

    I found a few small grammar errors that need fixed. Just read it over again yourself and you'll find them. If you fix the other itmes people suggested, you'll be off to a good start.

 
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