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I'd like feedback on my Hub: Space cities of Kas Smith's The Black Guard: Can th

  1. Nemanja Pavlovic profile image81
    Nemanja Pavlovicposted 7 months ago

    Hi Hubbers,

    I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my Hub Space cities of Kas Smith's The Black Guard: Can they work? (must be signed in to view). What can I do to improve? Thanks!

    1. Nemanja Pavlovic profile image81
      Nemanja Pavlovicposted 7 months ago in reply to this

      Hello? Anyone?

  2. Rupert Taylor profile image95
    Rupert Taylorposted 7 months ago

    Okay, I'll have a go. The grammar and spelling, issues that sabotage most first offerings, seem fine to me. I am not in a position to comment on the content as this is an area completely foreign to me.

    Your image lacks a source credit and this could be a problem. Headline typeface is haphazard, nouns, verbs etc. need to be capitalized.

    The biggest issue may be large blocks of type. They could be broken up into smaller sections with subheads. Adding more images would help.

    1. Nemanja Pavlovic profile image81
      Nemanja Pavlovicposted 7 months ago in reply to this

      Thank's a ton for your feedback Rupert, much appreciated!
      I will look into fixing those issues, then.

 
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