I'd like feedback on my Hub: Pleasing passengers with revamped Humsafar Express

  1. rajmalhotra07 profile image47
    rajmalhotra07posted 4 weeks ago

    Hi Hubbers,

    I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my Hub Pleasing passengers with revamped Humsafar Express (must be signed in to view). What can I do to improve? Thanks!

  2. Rupert Taylor profile image93
    Rupert Taylorposted 4 weeks ago

    There are several issues with this article but prime among them is the poor quality of the English. You need to find someone for whom English is their first language to go over the text and correct the many errors.

    Also, images need to be credited and free for use and they don't work well when they are bu8ched together at the end of the piece.

    You need to go to the Learning Center https://hubpageshelp.com/ but that's not going to help with your language skills.

 
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