I'd like feedback on my article: Top 10 Foods With Vitamin E and its benefits

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  1. Aman Prasad profile image60
    Aman Prasadposted 2 months ago

    Hi Hubbers,

    I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my article? What can I do to improve? Thanks!
    Here is my article: Top 10 Foods With Vitamin E and its benefits (must be signed in to view)

    1. CYong74 profile image95
      CYong74posted 2 months agoin reply to this

      Another problem is that you are spamming "Vitamin E." Doing so will not give you any SEO benefits. More likely, it will get your page blacklisted.

      1. Aman Prasad profile image60
        Aman Prasadposted 2 months agoin reply to this

        Thank you

    2. Deen pal profile image61
      Deen palposted 2 months agoin reply to this

      Dear sir i am following u  can i aspect feedback for my article .I tink I help u in future

      1. Aman Prasad profile image60
        Aman Prasadposted 2 months agoin reply to this

        Yes , what kind of help you want

        1. Deen pal profile image61
          Deen palposted 2 months agoin reply to this

          Just feedback on my article.In future thank u....

          1. Aman Prasad profile image60
            Aman Prasadposted 2 months agoin reply to this

            Ok

      2. theraggededge profile image97
        theraggededgeposted 2 months agoin reply to this

        Hi Deepa,

        Unless you can write in almost perfect English, your articles won't be accepted. Your comment indicates that your English skills are not yet up to the standard required by HubPages.

        1. Aman Prasad profile image60
          Aman Prasadposted 2 months agoin reply to this

          Thank you so much for pointing out.

          1. theraggededge profile image97
            theraggededgeposted 2 months agoin reply to this

            Aman, you might need to click on 'Chronological', top right, to see the posts in the correct order. You will also be able to see who is addressing whom.

            1. Aman Prasad profile image60
              Aman Prasadposted 2 months agoin reply to this

              Oh! Not I have understood thanks

  2. AliciaC profile image97
    AliciaCposted 2 months ago

    One problem is that you’ve included lots of nutrition facts in your article. You need to include authoritative references to support these facts. The title of the article should be written in title case and should be grammatically correct. The images should have a suitable license.

    The article contains multiple English errors. I’m sorry to say that parts of the article don’t make any sense. For example, you mention the quantity of vitamin E in cooked couch (perhaps you meant conch) and the minerals in cooked beds. You talk about a woodpecker in a section about almonds and you say that vitamin E causes Alzheimer's disease. In addition, despite its name, vitamin O is not a vitamin. You need to check what you've written and edit the article very carefully.

    1. Aman Prasad profile image60
      Aman Prasadposted 2 months agoin reply to this

      Thank you

    2. Aman Prasad profile image60
      Aman Prasadposted 2 months agoin reply to this

      If I will sovled this problem, can I able to publish it again

      1. theraggededge profile image97
        theraggededgeposted 2 months agoin reply to this

        Yes, if you can improve your English writing skills smile

 
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