I'd like feedback on my Hub: Getting traffic as a small handcraft producer

  1. CarlaMtz profile image61
    CarlaMtzposted 2 weeks ago

    Hi Hubbers,

    I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my Hub Getting traffic as a small handcraft producer (must be signed in to view). What can I do to improve? Thanks!

    1. theraggededge profile image96
      theraggededgeposted 2 weeks ago in reply to this

      Hi there,

      There are many grammatical errors that will prevent your article being approved. At one point you call your customers 'costumers'. And there's an error in your first subheading. This could be prevented if you carefully proofread your work before publishing. If you are unsure, then ask someone else to proofread for you.

      Remove the links. They aren't necessary.

      Good luck.

 
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