I'd like feedback on my article: Countless Conscious Decisions

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  1. 10.ABDUL profile image64
    10.ABDULposted 3 years ago

    Hi Hubbers,

    I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my article Countless Conscious Decisions. What can I do to improve? Thanks!

  2. Bede le Venerable profile image95
    Bede le Venerableposted 3 years ago

    Hi Abdul,
    You have some good thoughts. My first overall recommendation is to add more…it seems too short. Understandably, it’s a poem, so you may have included all that you wish to say; however, you want to get it approved, right? Maybe if you intersperse some prose commentary in between the verse, you could expand it more.

    Also, there are quite a number of typos, and incomplete sentences: “Everyone will see (the) consequence. (,) (the) Only solution is repentance.”

    The two photos at the end seem jarringly out of place. Maybe visit Pixabay. They have better photos that you can make use of.

  3. 10.ABDUL profile image64
    10.ABDULposted 3 years ago

    Perfect very useful thank you.

  4. 10.ABDUL profile image64
    10.ABDULposted 3 years ago

    From 10.Abdul to racist, where did these thoughts come from? Please explain. This poem isn't racial. I would like to hear your thoughts on whatever provoked those type thoughts.

    1. theraggededge profile image96
      theraggededgeposted 3 years agoin reply to this

      Ignore smile

    2. theraggededge profile image96
      theraggededgeposted 3 years ago

      Any newbie will find your wall of posts and oblique, off-topic comments intimidating, so it might be a good idea to stop.

      The guy was only trying to get his hub approved.

    3. CYong74 profile image97
      CYong74posted 3 years ago

      You have a let's make $$ link right at the bottom. That is a huge no-no.

      1. 10.ABDUL profile image64
        10.ABDULposted 3 years agoin reply to this

        Okay got it

    4. theraggededge profile image96
      theraggededgeposted 3 years ago

      LOL! That is hilarious after all that stuff about suicide...

      And the hub was written in 2010?

      https://usercontent1.hubstatic.com/13997940_f1024.jpg

    5. firstcookbooklady profile image85
      firstcookbookladyposted 3 years ago

      Interesting. I thought that the one comment about the response being closed was it. Then, all a sudden, there's more of the same. Then, I realized it was someone else, with the same reaction, who should really apologize to the first person trapped by the troll.

     
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