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Would Appreciate Your Feedback

  1. J. McCoy profile image60
    J. McCoyposted 7 years ago

    I haven't written in about 3 years and I'm new to Hubpages. So, I could use your feedback, opinions, ideas, and especially constructive criticism. Thanks for taking the time to come by and critique.

    http://hubpages.com/hub/Extended-Warran … in-English

  2. Lady_E profile image81
    Lady_Eposted 7 years ago

    Well done on your First Hub - it's an interesting Read.

    You could include more books in your Amazon Capsule if you wanted to.

    Hope you enjoy writing on HP.

    1. J. McCoy profile image60
      J. McCoyposted 7 years ago in reply to this

      Thank you for the advice. I will.

  3. Paradise7 profile image85
    Paradise7posted 7 years ago

    I thought that was a really decent hub, and didn't find anything wrong with it.  It contained a lot of information about extended warranties that is of general interest.

    One little suggestion:  when you get to the part where you're listing the odds of coming out ahead, and comparing them to the casino, you might want to do a list with bullets rather than put the info in a paragraph. 

    It was still entirely readable the way you did it and, of course, your personal and artistic choice.

    Thank you for a good hub!

    1. J. McCoy profile image60
      J. McCoyposted 7 years ago in reply to this

      That's a great idea that would make it easier reading. Thank you! I'll remember that for future hubs.

  4. lrohner profile image84
    lrohnerposted 7 years ago

    Really great job! Great writing and layout and good use of tags. I think the only input I would have is to keep your URL short and sweet. It doesn't have to reflect the whole title. In your case, I would have had a URL of http://hubpages.com/hub/extended-warran … ice-plans.

    And you have AdSense turned off for the hub. Was that intentional? Do you have an AdSense account? If not, you might want to bump up the Amazon ads and place them higher on the page as someone else suggested or you're simply not going to make any money.

    1. J. McCoy profile image60
      J. McCoyposted 7 years ago in reply to this

      Thank you for the advice! I don't know how long I would've used longer URL's if you hadn't told me that. I also didn't know exactly how Adsense works within HubPages. I'll make sure to get an account asap. Thanks again for taking the time to give me such specific and helpful advice!

 
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