Feedback needed :)

  1. sasanqua profile image87
    sasanquaposted 5 years ago

    I've written poetry my whole life, but I've only published one poem on hubpages. It hasn't had a great response so far, so maybe it's not very good? I'd love some feedback to help me decide whether I should publish more. Don't worry, it's short tongue

    http://sasanqua.hubpages.com/hub/The-Grassy-Knoll

 
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