First Hub, Any Critiques?
Hey HauserQ - welcome to HubPages
Your hub is, by and large - fine. It's a great first effort and what it lacks is you to go back and review/edit. You've got a few grammar/spelling mistakes that interrupt the flow of the text.
You could do with 'best nerf guns' being inserted into the text a few more times. 'this is why it's one of the best nerf guns' - 'this is one of the best nerf guns because ... ' kind of thing.
Don't go nuts though - a few naturally occurring repetitions of your keyword will suffice. Tags - you could choose better ones. Use one's that directly relate to your keyword - rather than generics that don't fit with the keyword - such as 'kids toys'.
buy a nerf gun, buy nerf, buy nerf guns, buy nerf guns online, best nerf guns to buy, best nerf gun, cheap nerf guns, cheapest nerf gun, cool nerf guns - etc.
And add something to your profile. Nothing too explanatory - just who you are, that you review products or some such. Makes you more user friendly.
Hope that helps
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