Re-edited: please, I would appreciate your oppininon!

  1. strato profile image77
    strato
    5 posts
    Joined: 8 months ago
    Hubs: 1
    Followers: 2

    It's the second time to ask for a review of my hubpage.

    This is because after the suggestions of the dear fellow hubbers who replied on my first post, I've made some changes.

    So please, take the time to visit my hubpage and tell me what you think about the "Smart Consumer".
    You'll find my hubpage at
    http://hubpages.com/hub/Consumer-Reports

    P.S. Because I live in Hellas - Greece, I cannot see the Kontera ads on my hubpage! So please, if you indeed can see the Kontera ads on my page let me know. Be healthy!

    Thanks in advance.

    Strato

    Posted 2 months ago
  2. Dame Scribe profile image96
    Dame Scribe
    2372 posts
    Joined: 13 months ago
    Hubs: 179
    Followers: 383

    Hi Strato, welcome to HubPages smile well, your hub is promoting another product which is alright. I don't think your tags are focused enough though. Lay out is good but I also think there is too much bold. Maybe use italics since it'll be softer on the eyes and try to keep the text flowing rather than broken between pics as it gives impression that's the end. Otherwise, it is well presented. You can see your kontera ads when you are NOT logged in wink

    Posted 2 months ago
 
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