Galaxy: A Poem

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Glimmers of light shine through a black veil,

Creating tiny pinpoints of hope in the night sky,

Our eyes fill with wonder at the brilliant sight,

Mesmerized, we lie on the cool grass,

Gazing up at the starry waltz,

Awestruck at the magnitude of it all.


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pochinuk 2 years ago

Erin,

"...black veil..."

"...starry waltz..."

Your poem rhythmically turns the reader around, three times upward to those:

"...tiny pinpoints of hope..."

Your what I would call a Skysister Poet!

Very galactic.

pochinuk


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Ebower 2 years ago from Georgia Author

pochinuk: Well, thank you! The night sky has always inspired me.


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BlossomSB 2 years ago from Victoria, Australia

A beautiful poem about the wonder and delight of the night sky, and it is so well written with a great use of imagery and interesting words and phrases. Enjoyed it very much.


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Eiddwen 2 years ago from Wales

A brilliant poem and voted up for sure.

Eddy.


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Ebower 2 years ago from Georgia Author

BlossomSB: Thank so much!

Eiddwen: Thank you for voting!

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