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Illuminations: A Poem
I daydream at night
And wait for the dawn
to face the harsh reality
that life has a careful rhythm
But like a roller coaster
It has unexpected turns
A few are exhilarating
Most just double cross me
Every light hour is varied
Yet they pass by the same
Then the dusk comes quietly
With relief I embrace it
Stars wink at me
Just enough brightness
Gives my head clarity
All is calm and I rest
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Comments
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AudreyHowitt: Thanks so much!
Every light hour is varied
Yet they pass by the same
Beautiful write!!!
Well, sounds good; you often think of the clear air above the Rockies rather than the humid South having clear skies, but I guess around where you guys are it's not all flat and humid. Blessings.
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f: Thanks! We do; the best view I saw was in North Georgia on top of a mountain.
Interesting. Voted up. Great picture, too... (Do you guys in Georgia get such clear skies?)
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CloudExplorer: Thanks so much! You're very welcome; I'll have to check out more of your hubs soon. :)
Lovely night time and shooting star type poem, I like your poetry its soothing and relaxing.
Thank you Ebower, for checking out my hub recently as well, and nice to meet ya here on hubpages.
I shall return to read many more in due time, see you soon voted up and out!
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Ahmed Foyez: Thanks so much! :D
Docmo: I like how you described it. I agree; life would be boring without all those ups and downs. Thank you!
Nice work here. You have captured the topsy turvy life beautifully with your insights here. OF course, it would perhaps be boring without all those twists and turns! voted up!
I found it beautiful Amazing writing. Voted up, beautiful, and awesome .................................so i like it
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Olde Cashmere: I appreciate your kind words so much! Thanks for voting. :)
This poem speaks to me and I found it beautiful. Very contemplative which leads to an awakening. Amazing writing. Voted up, beautiful, and awesome :)
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Ahmed Foyez: Thanks for commenting! I wrote this poem about the uncertainty of what can happen during the day and the peacefulness I find at night.
Elenin: I'm glad you found meaning in this. Thank you!
Sandy Frost: That's very true! Thanks for voting.
Niece piece of work. Sightings of dark endless sky at night and beautiful constellation of stars, both of them put us in state of calm and leave us pondering our minds about some life realizations.
Beautiful poem, voted up!
"A few are exhilarating
Most just double cross me"
I can relate to this. Nicely done.
what this
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