Our True Love

True love is here from the start
True love is here from the start
True love
True love
Our lips sealed
Our lips sealed
Love promised
Love promised
It would be impossible not to be together
It would be impossible not to be together
The sound of pattering feet
The sound of pattering feet

Our True Love


How lucky and privileged are we to have found a complete and true love. Some people search for a lifetime.

This is the best feeling ever and I so want each and everyone of you to experience this. The oneness and the complete unity of two people so in love.



Our True Love

Believe and follow your heart

True love is here from the start

The very first moment we knew

That look, that touch, like dew


Our depth of sheer emotion

For a life time of perfect devotion

We knew our limbs would entwine

Our lips sealed, yours and mine


We felt from the beginning a deep rapport

Longing to reach and touch even more

Our limbs yearned for loving caress

A complete and total happiness


Never before has a love been as complete

From the moment we knew we would never retreat

This teenage devotion

Would evoke such emotion


Love promised until the end of time

You would profess to always be mine

A love like ours will last for eternity

Our hearts will be joined with total serenity


If we waited from now until forever

It would be impossible not to be together

Our love will never be matched

We will be totally attached


Our love will be complete

With the sound of pattering feet

And our love will confess

To complete happiness

Comments 91 comments

Minnetonka Twin profile image

Minnetonka Twin 6 years ago from Minnesota

Very moving poetry. Your a great poet. Nice job.


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epigramman 6 years ago

.....my life is always complete when I come here and feel/read the glow of your radiant words - and your 'love' is so contagious that I think you must be the female counterpart to 'Cupid' .......and when I looked up the idea of 'love' in the dictionary it referred to your hubs as the essential manifestation of what love is all about - love ya too, says the epi-man!!!!


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richtwf 6 years ago

A simply beautiful poem expressing true love and I especially loved the last verse.

True love is indeed an amazing feeling and not too many of us ever get that opportunity to experience it but for sure I know I'm one of the very fortunate ones and I thank God for that blessing.

Wonderful poetry from our Lady Aphrodite of HP!


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acaetnna 6 years ago from Guildford Author

Thank you Minnetonka Twin I so appreciate your comments and am thrilled to read that you think I'm a good poet. Thank you, hopefully I will improve as I write more.


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acaetnna 6 years ago from Guildford Author

Epigramman, I am speechless again, truly lovely comments. Thank you SO much. You have such a way with words and I am really honoured that you have paid me such an amazing compliment. I am truly touched, thank you.


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acaetnna 6 years ago from Guildford Author

What a wonderful compliment being likened to Aphrodite. Thank you Richtwf. I am so pleased that you have been blessed with true love too.


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Secretmission 6 years ago from Sandwich

So sensual. You sound so loving and sensual. The love oozes through your words. It is when you experience true love that you completely feel it in your language. You are indeed aphrodite and I am so envious of your true love. Voted up, a beautiful poem.


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Jaggedfrost 6 years ago

??? There is a lot of love there. I wonder if you might have found a wider word choice to express the obvious emotions underneath this poem if you hadn't been so dedicated to your meter. I wish you the best of luck with your poetry.


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acaetnna 6 years ago from Guildford Author

Gosh thank you Secretmission for your lovely words.I am sure that you will have found true love, if not I have a feeling you will discover it very shortly. Take care.


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acaetnna 6 years ago from Guildford Author

You are absolutely right Jaggedfrost (great name by the way!)I am very new to this and hopefully in time my choice of words for expressing my emotions through poetry will improve. I am very grateful for your comments, thank you.


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ellacor 6 years ago

Acaetnna you hit the mark time and again. Just beautiful, you show such emotion and wear your heart on your sleeve. Awesome and voted up. I just love reading your poetry.


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acaetnna 6 years ago from Guildford Author

Thank you so much Ellacor. If you feel a deep emotion it is so much easier to write from the heart and that is what I try to do. I appreciate your comments.


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epigramman 6 years ago

..well what can I say - when I want to feel good I come here for a poetic hug and some relief from writing The Orange Pekoe Cult - lol lol lol


hubpageswriter 6 years ago

Our love will never be matched, we will be totally attached. Now that's a really good line, you're really talented, enjoy this much.;)


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Cheeky Girl 6 years ago from UK and Nerujenia

Wow, acaetnna - I think the time has come to tell you this - but this poem is a pure Hallmark moment. Have you ever considered writing love rhymes and poetry for them or the Blue Mountain Card company! I'd highly recommend it. This is just amazing. I loved the romantic sentiment here. I am so impressed with your poems, they are remarkable. I think poetry is making a serious come back on the Hub Pages thanks to great writing like this! Cheers!

PS, I loved the pictures too!


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acaetnna 6 years ago from Guildford Author

Thanks again Epigramman, I always enjoy your visit.


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acaetnna 6 years ago from Guildford Author

Lovely comments again from you Hubpageswriter. Many thanks, very much appreciated.


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saddlerider1 6 years ago

I am certain that you both have a BOND of love that is unbreakable and you are both truly in love. That is a fantastic feeling to love and be loved. In return you get to share so much happiness together and build a life and family from that bond.

It reads like you are both a match made in Heaven and I am so happy for you both. Your poem is expressive and filled with so much feeling. Nicely done, I enjoyed this read. You have a gift, follow your dreams now. peace and hugs from the Saddle


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acaetnna 6 years ago from Guildford Author

Gosh Cheeky Girl, what awesome comments from you. I am new to all of this and I am just writing how I feel. Guess I am just writing straight from my heart and amazingly it seems to be working at the moment! Long may it last! Maybe I should investigate the card companies, are you serious?!

I so appreciate your words and for taking the time to read my poetry. Thank you SO much.


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DREAM ON 6 years ago

I felt such a warm rush from had to toe.You clearly express yourself wonderfully.Each time I read one of your poems I am much happier than when I first began.I am hooked on the last picture on your hub.I found the babies feet so adorable.It is the best heart I have ever seen.


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acaetnna 6 years ago from Guildford Author

Thank you Dream on I am delighted that you feel much happier when you read my poetry. That is such a great honour, thank you so much. Yes I love the last picture too.


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littlesecret13 6 years ago from inside your mind

wow, I am totally moved by this poem, it is beautiful! i love it! I'm glad you found me so I could find you!


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acaetnna 6 years ago from Guildford Author

Thank you so much Littlesecret13. I will certainly look forward to reading more of your wonderful poetry.


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you suggest one 6 years ago from NOTTINGHAM ENGLAND

acaetnna,first of all I want to congratulate you on your superb poem,true love comes but once,after that everything is secondary,and look after those tiny feet for they are where your one true love really lives,secondly the words you use to express your feelings are your words from within YOU,never try to use any other, you will spoil yor meaning,you take care,


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acaetnna 6 years ago from Guildford Author

Thank you so much You Suggest One, and of course you have, thank you. I will continue to write with my feelings.Hopefully one day soon there will be those tiny feet!


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bodylevive 6 years ago from Loachapoka, Alabama

First of all, let me say WELCOME and thanks for stopping by I Found Love Just in Time. Your poems are beautiful, I particularly enjoyed this one because it is so ME with the exception of tiny feet.


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acaetnna 6 years ago from Guildford Author

Thank you so much Bodylevive for your very kind comments. Me too! I am so pleased I found your writing and will be hopping back to read some more.


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Nayothara 6 years ago

This is truly beautiful.. You are blessed with most beautiful subject in life.. LOVE!

Oh so beautiful the way you paint it.. And looking forward to your next poem...

Cheers!


jca197493@yahoo.c 6 years ago

This was beautiful! I am very happy I found your writing!!


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DjBryle 6 years ago from Somewhere in the LINES of your MIND, and HOPEFULLY at the RIPPLES of your HEART. =)

Beautifully written to captivate the soul! You seem so in love my friend! I love your poems! You are refreshing! =)


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acaetnna 6 years ago from Guildford Author

Thank you so much Nayothara, yes LOVE is the most beautiful of emotions. Some people wait a life time for it to happen, guess I am SO fortunate.


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acaetnna 6 years ago from Guildford Author

Thank you so much jca197493@yahoo.c I am so pleased you enjoyed this poem, it was written from my heart. I will stop by your hubs too.


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acaetnna 6 years ago from Guildford Author

Thank you DjBryle, true love is such a wonderful emotion and when it is reciprocated ten fold it is even MORE magical! I am a very lucky lady, he is a really special guy.


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warm_whispers 6 years ago

Dear acaetna

if he love you the way u love him he must say....

Every time I think about you,

I'm reminded of the reasons

why I love you from the depth

of my heart and soul.

And I wonder what I'd

do without you,

without your healing smile,

your words of faith,

the caring and sensitive way

you touch me,

lifting me

just when I need it most.

Without you,

what would I have?

What would I be?

I can't imagine existing in

a world where someone doesn't

love me the way you do.

You're the only one who ever

understood me and accepted me

for who I am.

And I think you're nothing short

of amazing.

Your love always has been

and always will be,

life's greatest gift to me!


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acaetnna 6 years ago from Guildford Author

This is truly wonderful Warm-whispers, thank you. You should make this into a hub, it's beautiful.


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nighthag 6 years ago from Australia

One of the most beautiful poems I have ever read... you are truly gifted


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acaetnna 6 years ago from Guildford Author

My goodness what a wonderful compliment Nighthag, thank you so much. I actually feel the same way about your poetry and love reading your hubs.


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attemptedhumour 6 years ago from Australia

Hey i'm getting a bit jealous, he can't be that perfect can he, um in words i suppose he can and your words say it all. Rhyme and sweet rhythm purring along in unison. Oh he's a lucky bloke i nearly forgot to mention that. Cheers.


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Lovingu 6 years ago from London

I do agree definitely Aphrodite. Your poetry is so romantic and beautiful acaetnna.


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acaetnna 6 years ago from Guildford Author

Thanks attemptedhumour (great hub name!). Hey a bit jealous! Have you read my poem on jealousy?!!


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acaetnna 6 years ago from Guildford Author

Great to see you again Lovingu - thanks for your comments.


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sentimental 6 years ago from India

"It flows in you and me it drives that what we wish to call WE....' Pure and sweet narration of culmination.....Truly a Gifted Soul You Are....Regards


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acaetnna 6 years ago from Guildford Author

What wonderful comments Sentimental, thank you so very much.


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kathryn1000 6 years ago from London

Lovely


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acaetnna 6 years ago from Guildford Author

Many thanks for stopping by Kathryn.


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DREAM ON 6 years ago

Your thoughts go deeper than the page that I read.So I will come back to feel the sweet emotions you share as beautiful as the air that surrounds me.Thanks for sharing your special gift.


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acaetnna 6 years ago from Guildford Author

Dream On you have such a special way with words. Thank you for returning.


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katiem2 6 years ago from I'm outta here

What a beautiful expression of love, our true love is such a touching and inspiring poem. Your a wonderful little cupid! Love and Peace :)


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acaetnna 6 years ago from Guildford Author

Thank you Katie, I just love your visits because you are the queen of love.


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agaglia 6 years ago

A nice poem on Love. Here's one for you.

Titled: "within the forest"

The garden nymph and woodland Satyr

made love within the forest.

Upon the moss strewn rocks of shade

their twinned heads came to rest.

Through dappled trees, their love-born sighs

strolled on the summer breezes.

The gauze of silk she wore that day

was rent with love’s sweet squeezes.

Fluttering wings and rapid hearts played

music soft and mellow.

The rustling leaves cocooned their love

in hues of reds and yellow.

Late summer blossoms bust with joy

and spent their flower fragrance.

While Autumn’s chill whispered true

the poetry of romance.

I hope you like it. Agaglia


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acaetnna 6 years ago from Guildford Author

Agaglia, I absolutely love it. I am totally in awe of you and very humbled that you should spare the time to write such an amazing poem. Thank you SO much, I shall be straight over to read your hubs.


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Micky Dee 6 years ago

Beautiful words and I love your pictures!

3 hubs for the price of one!


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acaetnna 6 years ago from Guildford Author

Thank you Micky I so appreciate your visit.


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Craan 6 years ago from Florida

What a beautiful poem! I love the little baby feet in hands, how awesome. We all dream for a true love and it is magically found instantly when a little bambino is divinely created.


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katiem2 6 years ago from I'm outta here

Love poems and your poems of Our true love is so beautiful you dear have a amazing gift, may your gift always flow freely with love.


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acaetnna 6 years ago from Guildford Author

Thank you Craan for reading my poetry. Yes I too really love the baby feet in hands, I thought it so appropriate.


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acaetnna 6 years ago from Guildford Author

I love you visiting Katie because you can really relate to the amazing feeling of love.


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@MagicBoy 6 years ago from Qatar

Beautifully written about the best thing which happened to this world..Love..after reading your words, I feel like falling in love all over again..Truly inspiring..Thanks for sharing..Keep the light beaming..


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acaetnna 6 years ago from Guildford Author

Lovely to meet you @MagicBoy and for your lovely compliments. Well I do hope you fall in love all over again ... a truly wonderful feeling.


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devsir 6 years ago from Earth

How Nice your poem is! You can do wonders by your words. I am a fan.


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acaetnna 6 years ago from Guildford Author

I am thrilled you are a fan, you write so many wonderful hubs Devsir.


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john27 6 years ago

lovely page it remind me to

romantics love good work !!


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acaetnna 6 years ago from Guildford Author

Great to have you here John and thank you so much for your comment.


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Denise Handlon 6 years ago from North Carolina

Oh, I have to agree with Cheeky Girl--make the connection with a card company, or start your own line.

Beautiful sentiments. I LOVE the photo of the heart/hands holding the infant's feet. :)


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acaetnna 6 years ago from Guildford Author

Thank you Denise, do you really think I could?! What a compliment, thank you so much.


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Astra Nomik 6 years ago from Edge of Reality and Known Space

Yup, greeting cards are so totally right up your creative street. Have you checked the website of Blue Mountain Greeting cards, they request poets to send in poetry submissions. I sent some in to them a while back, at Cheeky's insistence. I also checked out Fina Art America. We advertise them on our website near the Street end of the site. They do greeting cards. Contact artists and painters, as many of them do art for greeting cards there. You can buy art on the site as art or cards or posters.

"Man does not live by bread alone", goes for ladies too. :)


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acaetnna 6 years ago from Guildford Author

Oh wow Cathy, thanks so much for your advice and help. Did you have any success?


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Pollyannalana 5 years ago from US

Very good, poetry is new to me and I have fallen in love with it the last year here and have a copyright on over 200, you may want to watch that because here lately maybe on hubs someone said some people will steal your poems,change a few words and call it their own! Sucks, huh?


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acaetnna 5 years ago from Guildford Author

Hello Pollyannalana great to have you here and to receive your comments. Many thanks for the input - don't know how to go about copyright - may be you can advise me!Will be over to check out your poetry now!


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Eiddwen 5 years ago from Wales

You are such a star acaetnna because there is so much grief and cruelty in this world but you remind everyone of all the love and happiness there is also all around us.

I agree with Cheeky Girl and Denise, make that connection with a card company or begin your own. I'm sure that the day will come when you will something along these lines. How many times do we go through cards and none say what we want them to.

I am so glad to be following you and it's an up/awesome/beautiful here.

Take care acaetnna.


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acaetnna 5 years ago from Guildford Author

Gosh you are so lovely Eiddwen, I do so very much thank you for your kindness. I agree with you about finding the perfect greetings card, I rarely can! I find the most beautiful picture and then discover the words are simply not right! Maybe I really should investigate the possibility. I so appreciate your comments and your friendship. Take care Eiddwen.


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lifewellspoken 5 years ago from Vancouver BC

Wow!!!! your words are magic, thank you for this poem.


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devsir 5 years ago from Earth

I think I must start a website for LOVE on my domain and publish your poems there. Don't worry full credit will be given to you.


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acaetnna 5 years ago from Guildford Author

Oh wow thanks Devsir. I would love to star a website but have no idea how to!


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acaetnna 5 years ago from Guildford Author

Hello Lifewellspoken how did I manage to miss you out?! You squeaked in without me noticing! Sorry!


Doug Turner Jr. 5 years ago

Good Lord, your poems are popular. Maybe I should get over my fear of using the L-word -- it might direct more traffic my way. But let's be honest: the real reason everyone loves your poetry (there's that L-word!) is the elegant simplicity with which you paint your emotions. These feelings are universal, and you convey them with beauty and ease. Cheers and bravo. Well done.


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acaetnna 5 years ago from Guildford Author

What amazing comments Doug - thank you. Your poems are always so amazing - I love them even though they don't feature 'love'!! Hey I love the new profile picture - great strategy for getting the girls to your hubs!!! I hope to be the first to visit!


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Dr irum 5 years ago

Amazing poem ,i enjoyed visit on your pages .


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acaetnna 5 years ago from Guildford Author

Thank you Dr Irum - I so appreciate your visit and I hope that you will find the time to visit again soon.


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daydreamer13 5 years ago

Lovely!


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acaetnna 5 years ago from Guildford Author

I appreciate that Daydreamer - thank you.


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Cloverleaf 5 years ago from Calgary, AB, Canada

Lovely poem! The photo of the little baby's feet is just adorable. So much to relate to in this hub, it's great to read something so uplifting and awesome, rated up!! :-)


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acaetnna 5 years ago from Guildford Author

Hello Cloverleaf - thank you for your lovely comment. Babies are totally adorable aren't they and that particular photo is wonderful.


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Astra Nomik 5 years ago from Edge of Reality and Known Space

Sorry for not answering sooner, acaetnna. I can't publish anything in greeting cards if they appear in a book. That's what I was told. Copyright and legal reasons. Ouch. It's because I am putting my poetry into a book. Sucks. LOL.


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acaetnna 5 years ago from Guildford Author

Thanks for your input Cathy. I had forgotten all about it actually, but guess I ought to investigate further. That's amazing you are publishing a poetry book, how exciting is that - well done. Please let me know when it's available to buy.


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ubanichijioke 5 years ago from Lagos

This is flawless, fantastic and beautiful


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acaetnna 5 years ago from Guildford Author

Thank you so much Ubanichijioke, I always appreciate your comments.


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AudreyHowitt 4 years ago from California

Lovely ans loving write!!!


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Cracknutcase 4 years ago from India,bangalore

Lovely poem.. None could've done justice to this poem but you My friend.

Voted way up! :)


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acaetnna 4 years ago from Guildford Author

Thank you so much Audrey.


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acaetnna 4 years ago from Guildford Author

Cracknutcase - wow thank you so much.

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