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Our Love is Like a Rainbow
Our Love is Like a Rainbow
The rain was pouring down outside and running down the window pane. The sun was streaming in and through the glass I could see the most beautiful rainbow. It was so wonderful that it reminded me of the one I love. My Truelove.
Our Love is Like a Rainbow
Our love is like a rainbow
Arching gently to the ground
Dreaming of togetherness
Without a simple sound
The richness of our kisses
So moist and tender still
Deep is this love of ours
That will completely fulfil
Through struggles and strives
Our true love will never die
It overcomes all emotions
We will never ever lie
You are my constant strength
A man of strong desire
When your arms are wrapped around me
I know I am on fire
This passion burns within me
We ignite our love again
Touch me, hold me, feel me
Breathe love through every vein
Your fingers caress me gently
Your lips and tongue probe more
This amazing sensation
Reaches through me to the core
Always stirring with such passion
As our limbs gently entwine
We are complete and as one again
Your love and mine
Comments
Another beautiful poem of love delivered by HP's Resident Goddess of Love - Lady Aphrodite! You weave such wonderful words of love and combine them with strong erotic imagery - Wow! - What an amazing sensual synergy that is!
Always a great delight to read and to be inspired by your words of love. Keep spreading the love message!
God bless you Lady A!
This is a beautiful poem of love and passion. Very nice.
Rainbow and love to go together, love is located at the end of the rainbow, not a pot of gold. You have such a sweet and loving heart, you must have this in your life inorder to understand it. Love & peace darski
Passion to the xxxtreme! So beautiful, your so lucky
...your hub space and the writing which blesses it is like a rainbow ......now we know what Judy Garland was singing about .....somewhere over the rainbow is a love doctor who touches us deeply and prescibes her potent and priceless poetry to make the hub world glad she is here and that we are here to enjoy each other!!!!!
Very moving poem about love entwined.
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Richtwf you are so generous with your comments as always. I am honoured that you enjoy my poetry. We all need to experience a wonder of love. Take care.
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Thank you Pamela I love it when you visit and leave a comment.
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Darlene you are always such a joy and I always love your comments. Thank you for your time - I always so appreciate it. Take care.
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Thank you Amy, everyone has the ability to love and it is awesome when it is reciprocated.
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Wow Epigramman, you know I always look forward to your visits. Fantastic comments - you have such a way with words. Love and hugs. x
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Thanks for your visit Aware I so appreciate it.
You certainly are the Love Goddess, this Saddle had to go take a cold shower, your sensual pictures added to the heat. You are a magnificent lover and I know your partner is deeply in love with you as you are with him.
I wish you both happiness and lots of LOVE...just keep showering us with your tender words so descriptive and steaming with richness and great choice of words.
Your verse is poetry in motion and it is needed here at the Hubs, thank you for sharing your creativeness with us.
This poem conveys love and a wonderful sense of passion! You are just amazing! And the photos add that little extra! (Even if your poem dont need it) Thanks for sharing your lovely thoughts! Take care!
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Thank you so much Saddlerider, you just know what to say to make a girl happy. Sorry you had to take a cold shower! I am glad I had that effect on you though - it shows the magic is working! Love and happiness to you always, you so deserve it. x
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You are very kind Thoughtforce - I love your visits to share my poetry. Thank you.
Your words are beautiful and your poem is just so passionate. I love your poetry and you never fail to make me feel so romantic. Your choice of pictures are brilliant too.
This is so passionate and pure of love. You always write with your heart speaking. Loved this :)
xx blaise
This is so beautiful.You write with such passion.I'm so thrilled to follow you.Thank you.
Cheers
goshhhhhh if that guy's me i have nothing to say than, ..as she spoke's of understanding, I looked up and saw the rainbow leap with flames of many colors over me.
lost with words to comment i have no more
so much Love and passion it's overwhelming. A beautiful Poem my dear. God Bless
beautifully done --- love, emotion and passion always come through so strongly and eloquently in your poems!
More of the same please :-)
Wow, I love your poetry, so sensual and warm. You have a real passion for writing, and it shows, my friend! Any more and I would have to open a window and let the steam out! :) Great hub, and a tribute to love and rainbows. I love your pictures too. Very evocative!
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I am so pleased my poem made you feel romantic. Romance is so special and makes us feel so loved and wonderful. I appreciate your comments, thank you so much.
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Thank you Twentyfive, the only way I can write is from what I feel in my heart. For me it is the best and only way.
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Always Exploring, thank you. I am always so thrilled that you read and comment on my poetry - thank you.
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Warm_whispers - you are wonderful - thank you.
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Thank you Vietnamvet - I love yo visiting my poetry.
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Damiam0000 you are very kind, I really appreciate your interest and comment.
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Hi Cheeky Girl, yes I seem to have created rather a lot of steam here. I always so appreciate our comments - thanks ever so!
THIS IS DEEP IN MY LADY.. LOVE THIS.. I ALSO ENJOYED THE PICTURES. HOW LOVELY THE COLORS ARE AMAZING.. GREAT POEM THIS IS THE SEASON FOR LOVE. THANKS, VOTED
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Thanks Heart Felt Book - yes the colours are amazing aren't they - I just love colour. Yes definitely the season for love!
I love rainbows, they symbolize so much...what a lovely read, very rich and rewarding. Love the pictures too. I'm glad I stopped by.
I always thought of rainbows of promises, and if your rainbows promise more of love as sensual, close and warm as that - I know you will enjoy that forever love we are all either dreaming of, share, or remember. Lady Love, your words and mastery of them are enchanting as usual.
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I appreciate you stopping by and leaving such lovely comments b. Malin - thank you so much.
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Thank you Erin I hope that everyone can give and receive love such as this.
Those moments together are the climax but of course it is all the things leading up to it that heighten the passion. Your poems start and end with romance and that's why so many of us keep coming back for a reminder of those precious shared moments. Cheers from sizzling Oz
A very beautiful passion filled poem,i will look at rainbows differently now! :-)
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I absolutely agree with you Attemptedhumour it is all about living up to the climax. Each and every moment should be lived in love. I am humbled by your comment - thank you so much.
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Rainbows are beautiful and so are you. Thanks Kashmir56.
EWwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww This is cosmic,brillant, steamy, wonderful and packed with passion! Gotta love a rainbow and love is a great comparison. I love the rain am drawn to it and the rainbow is the rest in all rains beauty. Love, Peace and JOY!
That was so passionate. Beautiful projection of thoughts. It reminded me of my hub (you've already visited) which had the same tenor.
https://hubpages.com/literature/Touchedbyamagicwan
Great work.
Steamy storms of love collide in the kaliedescope of your passion. You rule the heat of hub poetry. Cheers.
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Hello Katie, I always love your comments. You, in my opinion, are the oracle of love. Thank you for visiting. Take care.
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Thank you Anjalichugh for your comments. Yes I do remember reading your lovely hub.
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Hello Sligobay! I love your suggestion of 'kaliedescope of your passion' - awesome. I love to see you here.
I agree you are the love Godess! Beautiful poetic voice! Thank you!
I have always wondered how it is to pronounce your beautiful name. acaetnna. What does it means if you don't mind. Beautiful poem here. You have a talent for it, too bad I'm not an expert in poetry for I'd love to create such perfect words like you have. Here's to more acaetnna.=)
My friend you made this poem so beautiful. You also made my day so colorful. Your heart is beautiful like a rainbow and I never doubt about this. I hope your love message would be heard by all the people in the world...amen. I give my Vote special for you. Love and peace!
Prasetio
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Thank you Pennyofheaven, you are very kind.
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Hello Hubpageswriter. My name has been derived from an ancient Greek name, and I agree it is difficult to pronounce but guess it suits me! You are always so thoughtful and your words reassuring to me. Thank you.
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Thank you Prasetio - you are wonderful and spoil me with your beautiful words. Thank you.
Wow, you seem to have nailed it...true love at its best.
Absolutely lovely - you are so gifted with these love poems. :)
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Thanks Lady_E I am pleased you think so. I am grateful that a talent such as yourself takes the time to read and comment on my poetry.
Definitely our resident 'Love Goddess', how do you always manage it acaetnna? You are clearly in love and want the world to know. I love the way you likened your love to a rainbow, rainbows are so beautiful.
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Yes I am in love and want to shout it from the rooftops - thanks Secretmission, you are awesome.
Buttons up but those pics are going to give me night-mares! Great hub!
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Oh dear I can't give you nightmares! Sorry! I love your comments - thank you.
Wow! Now this is what I call erotic. Well done, acaetnna! I’ll have to read it again. And the pictures :)))) Just to make sure I got the message in all its widths and depts.
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Thanks MartieCoester I always so appreciate your comments. Thank you.
Just beautiful!
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Thanks Stricktlydating - great to see you here.
Stole a copy of the second image here...LOL
Liked the poem will look to see what else you have here...
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It is lovely isn't it - I wont tell anyone that you stole it!! So glad you liked the poem. You might enjoy 'If I Had Three Wishes', too!
My only dilema was whether to rate this awesome or beautiful, I picked beautiful because it was just so touching. Just finished reading Chrissies latest poem and I swear you 2 girls are so alike in your poems that I just cant get enough of you both.
What a damn shame 2 lucky buggers have you both but hey you will always have my support, write more ok and I hope he appreciates you, you are one lovely person x
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Wow TattoGuy you are such a loyal supporter. Your comments are amazing. Thanks SO much for your loyal support.
AWESOME! The best place for love, I find here in your hubs.... I am so blessed been able to read your poem and feel the change of real true love. Thanks for sharing these beautiful thoughts and keep doing that, it would make this world a much better place! Thank you.. :)
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How lovely to have your comments again Nayothara - I've missed you! Thank you Nayothara I am glad you enjoyed this poem.
Ummmm... did you write something? I was noticing some hot pictures and you know...
Awesome poem... you are quite the romantic... very hot writing with class....
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Thank you Suburban Poet - I have missed you. Thank you for stopping to read and commenting - I appreciate it.
I love Rainbows :)
and now i can read a poem about love and Rainbows!
thank you. ;)
P.s: ur poem made me smile.. that illuminating smile that only means...
I feel your words.
Peace&Love..
ZulmaDear :)
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I am glad this made you smile ZulaDear. I love rainbows too, they are simply so beautiful. Thanks for reading my poem and for your comments.
Precious words to make a body ache! Thank you for sharing your beautiful words!
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Gosh thank you Azure_sky.
Beautiful words and pictures to compliment them.
You really are very talented writer.
Take care acaetnna
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I am humbled by you comment Eiddwen - thank you so much.
Lovely
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Joshua thank you for reading my poem and appreciating it.
...well, I know what kind of dreams I'm going to have tonight :) Rainbows and mad, passionate love it is! You, acaetnna, have created a lovely and sensual work of art. A most magnificent poem along with beautiful photos. You are a genuine diamond. Voted up and beautiful...just like you!
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Vocalcoach thank you so much for your wonderful comments. You are so kind - may all your dreams come true.
This is a very beautiful and passionate poem acaetnna. I love your photos also.
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I am pleased you enjoyed this hub - thank you Carrie450.
Whoops, wish I was that brave, I have one really wild one, based on truth but I just don't know..I took it down pretty quick, sometimes words just come don't they, without really thinking. I really love it, maybe one day there will be a place for it. I love your poetry.
Polly
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Pollyannalana thank you so very much. I was checking out your website today - fantastic. I just loved the piece about Diana, the Queen of Hearts. A wonderful tribute to her, my absolute favourite TRUE royal. Brilliant.
Another beautiful one, in which intimacy is embellished with such beautiful words...
your man is really lucky to have you...your poems shows your love...
god bless you..
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Rishworld thank you so much for your very kind words.
Love is all of the colors blended together to form perfection. You paint them beautifully. up awesome and beautiful
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Thank you JadedLove, I so appreciate your visit and comment.
You are great with this style! Congrats to you!
Hello dear acaetnna - This poem is so very beautiful and romantic, I had to come back and read it again. I have a question about the 2nd line. You wrote "aching" and I'm just wondering if you meant "arching." Please forgive me if I have intruded ... Hugs -= vocalcoach
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Hi Vocalcoach you are awesome. Yes I made a mistake, I did mean arching and you are the only person to spot the mistake, or at least the only one brave enough to mention it! I am really grateful and have now corrected my mistake. Thank you. I appreciate your comment, after all that's what we are all here for surely, to improve our work. So thank you as always Vocalcoach.
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