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I Miss You When You're Away

Updated on February 15, 2012
Hungry for love
Hungry for love
Beautiful flowers
Beautiful flowers
Your moist emotional kiss
Your moist emotional kiss
I miss you when we are apart
I miss you when we are apart
Candle lit meal
Candle lit meal
Together we are complete
Together we are complete

I Miss You When You're Away

When my Truelove goes away - even for a day I miss him so much. He is always with me in my heart and attached to my soul, but I feel so much more complete when he is physically with me.

A love like ours is everlasting and complete . . .


I MIss You When You're Away


Flowers that mean so much

Always a symbol of our love

A perfect bouquet, my favourite colours

Lilac, pink and as white as a dove


How you always remember

Each special day

And spoil me

In every perfect way


Your sweet note in my purse

Remind me of our love so true

Every moment you are away

Inscribed ‘I love you’


Your soft tender lips kissing goodbye

Our day's so long when we are apart

Happy am I to hear your key in the lock

When you return to me sweetheart


Your arms tight around me

And the warmth of your touch

Whispering words I've longed to hear

How you’ve missed me so much


A candle lit meal

With our favourite wine

Together again to share every moment

Of our blissful romance, yours and mine


With hungry anticipation

Looking into my eyes once more

Caressing my hand

We lead each other to the bedroom door


Slowly we kiss and entwine

Your soft gentle touch

This feeling of complete harmony

We've needed so much


We make love through the night

Sharing our joy

Whispering our longing

For a new baby boy

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      DREAM ON 3 years ago

      I haven't seen you for awhile. I love all your work. Great thoughts about love that bring in so many beautiful images to mind. I hope all is well. Thank you for sharing.

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      acaetnna 4 years ago from Guildford

      Wow thank you Sunilkunnoth2012 ... am making the most of my hubby now that he is back!!! Thank you so much for stopping by and leaving an awesome comment. Take care.

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      Sunil Kumar Kunnoth 4 years ago from Calicut (Kozhikode, South India)

      Good poetical expression. I just loved it and voted up.

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      acaetnna 4 years ago from Guildford

      Thelma Alberts - thank you SO much!

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      Thelma Alberts 4 years ago from Germany

      Beautiful! I like it very much. Thanks for sharing;-)

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      acaetnna 4 years ago from Guildford

      Pstraubie48 thank you so very much. The angels have certainly arrived with me today. The sun is shining and I have even more joy in my heart. Have a wonderful day today and always.

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      Patricia Scott 4 years ago from sunny Florida

      So lovely...such love transports us to a place that only those who know this kind of love can feel...that perfect love that asks only that we share and adore and revel in its glory.

      Thank you for sharing this.

      Sending Angels your way today :) ps

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      acaetnna 4 years ago from Guildford

      Epi you are awesome and your very visits make me breathless!

      What wonderful company your cats must be. Your dinner sounds positvely yummy (apart from the eye rib steak!!! - I am a vegetarian!!)

      Being hungry for love keeps one young - don't you think?!!!

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      epigramman 4 years ago

      The very words that I utter breathlessly to you Miss S - I miss you when you go away - and here I am sending you warm wishes and big Canadian hugs from the three of us: Colin, Tiffy and Gabriel and we are asking how you have been keeping.

      I just finished a lovely dinner of baby potatoes and a rib eye steak and now for some caramel moccha layer cake . I think your writing makes me hungry for love - lol - and I must admit your words always make my world go 'round ...... lake erie time canada 6:49pm

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      acaetnna 4 years ago from Guildford

      Hyphenbird thank you so much for your comment. It was meant to be romantic but I am so pleased that it evokes the feeling of loving a best friend too. I do hope that you are able to see you best friend again very soon.

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      Brenda Barnes 4 years ago from America-Broken But Still Beautiful

      This is a very beautiful poem. I know it is meant to be romantic and certainly achieves that intent. Somehow though it made me think of my best friend Beth who currently lives many hours away. I miss her all the time and wish I could see her forever smiling face. Different kinds of love remain strong don't they? Thanks for a wonderful and beautiful read.

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      acaetnna 5 years ago from Guildford

      What amazing, truly amazing comments Thelyricwriter, thank you so very much. I am sure they are not completely deserved; but I do my best and am able to do this from my total love experience. I realise that I am exceedingly fortunate and I thank God every day.

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      Richard Ricky Hale 5 years ago from West Virginia

      Up, awesome, and beautiful. More then anything, you are truly blessed to feel this way, feeling true love. Just an absolutely beautiful poem Acaetnna. There is no better feeling in the world. You capture how wonderful it is to be loved, "truly loved" that is.

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      acaetnna 5 years ago from Guildford

      Ha ha Cleaner3 - thank you. Yes he definitely still has my heart, lucky me! Great comments, brilliant, thank you.

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      cleaner3 5 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      Wow, does this man still have your heart, because you sure have mine, with your rhyming abilty with words of love, that come from your heart so true.

      great poetry.

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      acaetnna 5 years ago from Guildford

      You are so right Jackie, even a few hours apart makes the reunion all the sweeter. Thanks so much for stopping by.

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      Jackie Lynnley 5 years ago from The Beautiful South

      Absence does make the heart grow fonder and makes for some happy reunions.

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      acaetnna 5 years ago from Guildford

      Thank you Sannel, yes I am definitely blessed, I realise that and I am so grateful.

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      SanneL 5 years ago from Sweden

      This is truly lovely. You are blessed with the most beautiful subject in life... LOVE!

      Take care my dear!

      Sannel

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      acaetnna 5 years ago from Guildford

      Thank you Ruchira, even an hour or two apart is all it takes to miss him. It is wonderful when we reunite though, just like meeting for the first time and remembering and feeling my heart skipping a beat and butterflies in my tummy! I appreciate your visit and lovely comment, thank you so much.

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      Ruchira 5 years ago from United States

      Hi Acaetnna,

      As they say that distances makes one long for the person more and dearer. I guess that holds true now...you have proved it :))

      When we miss the person we love...the distances seem to become shorter and the days become longer.

      Loved the beautiful yet heartwarming poetry.

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      acaetnna 5 years ago from Guildford

      What an amazingly lengthy comment from you. Thank you, I so appreciate all the care that you show through your words. I certainly agree with you that it is impossible to replace a most perfect love. My love remains for always very, very special and is completely irreplaceable.

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      StvRich 5 years ago from East Rockaway - Long Island - Planet: Earth ~

      I'm working (slowly) through your pieces. This was very sweet. I've been known to leave a note or two myself. And I loved to bring "Her" flowers- for no reason. She loves yellow. especially sunflowers. I had mentioned before that I had once had words like yours flow-aplenty from my own fingers easily. But this was not the case with everyone who was in my life. Once... only once, did a Woman move me so. She was a dark-eyed Italian/Welsh Beauty. I called her eyes "crystalline-brown". I could so easily just wax rhapsodic... I swear. I used to write and write and write to her... I referred to her OWN love of me, the expression of her heart as a: "Fiery Brazier upon which to forge my own Heart"... It literally is a "song" in your heart when you are like this. It's beautiful. (and no, I don't WANT a replacement female, in my case). There can be no such thing. It is impossible to 'replace' her. I despise the "other fish in the sea" argument. But I do miss "Her". Just as you mention the feeling here. When "gone", you simply are waiting for their return. Very Much So. Very very touching. Beautiful Work.

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      acaetnna 6 years ago from Guildford

      KoffeeKlatch Gals thank you. I always miss him when he is away but he certainly makes up for it on his return! It makes all the waiting so worthwhile!

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      Susan Haze 6 years ago from Sunny Florida

      acaetnna, beautiful as always. There is nothing so uplifting as the feeling of love.

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      acaetnna 6 years ago from Guildford

      I absolutely do September Girl, he is the love of my life and I certainly appreciate just how lucky I am.

      Thank you for visiting. I shall be over to check out your hubs shortly.

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      september girl 6 years ago

      You must really love your husband, acaetnna. You also sound like you are one lucky lady to have his love returned in such warm expression. Voted this one up and beautiful!

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      acaetnna 6 years ago from Guildford

      Leptirela, gosh you are so amazing - thank you for your unbelievable comments.

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      Leptirela 6 years ago from I don't know half the time

      Absolutely love it

      awesome (clicked)

      amazing stuff, well done

      and thank you for sharing with us such beauty

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      acaetnna 6 years ago from Guildford

      Thanks Jet!

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      acaetnna 6 years ago from Guildford

      I am so grateful for your response Peaceful Life - thank you.

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      Peaceful life 6 years ago from Las vegas

      wow..your poem is so beautiful like you....*_*

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      acaetnna 6 years ago from Guildford

      Hello Dr Irum thank you so much for visiting.

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      Dr irum 6 years ago

      i miss you when you are away ,nice description by poetry .

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      acaetnna 6 years ago from Guildford

      Thank you Secretmission.

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      Secretmission 6 years ago from Sandwich

      I miss it when I am away from your words for too long!

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      acaetnna 6 years ago from Guildford

      Husbands are very special, I hope he treats you well. Love him and he will in return mirror that love back to you. Hope to see you again, thanks so much for your comment.

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      not white trash 6 years ago

      wow was not expecting poetry about love today in my frame of mind, thank you, sometimes I forget that my husband is a good man and I do love him. Thanks.

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      acaetnna 6 years ago from Guildford

      Wow thank you Hubpageswriter I so look forward to receiving comments from you.

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      hubpageswriter 6 years ago

      Beautiful, acaetnna. I'm really looking forward to more of your poetic writings, for I love reading them. Love is such a beautiful topic to be explored and written. Hub up as always.

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      acaetnna 6 years ago from Guildford

      Ah thank you so much Hillrider. I hope that you enjoyed the read.

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      hillrider 6 years ago from Mid-west United States

      Any poem with 21 Awesome and 24 Beautiful votes deserves an up vote from me as well...

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      acaetnna 6 years ago from Guildford

      Thanks Chrissie I am so pleased that you enjoyed it.

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      chrissie123 6 years ago

      This was absolutely amazing! marked as beautiful for sure! I really enjoyed the loving feeling from this so romantic!

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      acaetnna 6 years ago from Guildford

      Thank you TattoGuy you are always so supportive, a great friend too - someone I can rely on for positive feedback. Take care and thank you. Happy New Year to you and may all your dreams come true.

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      TattoGuy 6 years ago

      Gotta say that was beautiful although tis easy to see why he loves you, just look at the comments and love for you shining through on this page. I also agree with Money Glitch, the pics really compliment it, heres hoping 2011 ends with you being a Mum ; ) x

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      acaetnna 6 years ago from Guildford

      Thank you, you are always so complementary.

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      K.A.E Grove 6 years ago from Australia

      you are true artist of words, this was beautiful

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      acaetnna 6 years ago from Guildford

      I certainly agree with you Shimmering Dawn. The coming together is great but it is so painful to be apart.

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      shimmering Dawn 6 years ago

      So warm and rich this feeling of love that come through your words.. doesn't distance make the heart fonder? and the coming together is much more stronger!! beautiful!!

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      acaetnna 6 years ago from Guildford

      I am glad this poem has stirred the romance in you. There is nothing to beat love and romance in my opinion. I loved your visit, thank you. Have a wonderful new year.

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      Mohan Kumar 6 years ago from UK

      This piece of starlight has fired up my romantic mood so much. You have a gift of sharing and showing your love with such depth of emotion- He is truly a lucky guy. Wish you both the very best of the New Year!

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      acaetnna 6 years ago from Guildford

      Thank you Suburban Poet, it is lovely to see you here.

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      acaetnna 6 years ago from Guildford

      Thank you Samiaali it is a wonderful feeling and I hope you are experiencing it too.

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      The Suburban Poet 6 years ago from Austin, Texas

      Very romantic and with the added wish of a child it becomes a statement of life; one that we all hope for... I'm sure your husband was very happy to see this....

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      samiaali 6 years ago

      What a beautiful poem about sweet love! I hope you always have this wonderful feeling with your heart. I loved it!

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      acaetnna 6 years ago from Guildford

      I am glad to see you here Devsir - thank you for your comment.

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      devsir 6 years ago from Earth

      I really miss you why you are away. Awesome Poem.

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      acaetnna 6 years ago from Guildford

      Thanks Joy56 I hope so too. Don't be shy, I am a really shy person but I feel I can shout it to the world on Hubpages!

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      Joy56 6 years ago

      I hope you and your partner stay together forever. I would be far too shy to write as openly as you do. Well done lovely expressions of a great relationship.

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      acaetnna 6 years ago from Guildford

      Thank you Twilight Lawns I appreciate your comment so much.

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      Twilight Lawns 6 years ago from Norbury-sur-Mer, Surrey, England. U.K.

      It's a corny thing to say, and it's been said many times, but what you have writen is so romantic; so lovely. That poem was straight from the heart. I'm going to read some more.

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      acaetnna 6 years ago from Guildford

      Love is a beautiful emotion as you well know Pennyofheaven. Thank you so much for reading and commenting on this poem.

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      pennyofheaven 6 years ago from New Zealand

      Oh acaetnna, how romantically delicious this poem is! I love love in all its forms and you make love jump off the pages invoking such emotion. Thank you!

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      acaetnna 6 years ago from Guildford

      Thank you Lifewellspoken, I am pleased you enjoyed my poem.

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      lifewellspoken 6 years ago from Vancouver BC

      I can see now why somebody would miss you.

      I love this poem.

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      acaetnna 6 years ago from Guildford

      Wow thanks Meteoboy I really appreciate your visit and comments.

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      meteoboy 6 years ago from GREECE

      Full of feelings .This is a piece of art!!! Thank you.

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      acaetnna 6 years ago from Guildford

      Hello Blaise thank you so much for visiting me here.

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      Fehl Dungo 6 years ago from close to you...

      Sweet sweet verse :) You're very much in love my friend :)

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      acaetnna 6 years ago from Guildford

      Thank you so much Freya for reading this poem and for making such lovely comments.

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      Freya Cesare 6 years ago from Borneo Island, Indonesia

      This is really beautiful and I think with all comments above, you do not need me to tell you what you already know. Love it! Thank you for sharing this. ^_^

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      acaetnna 6 years ago from Guildford

      Very many thanks Dave I am so pleased you stopped by.

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      acaetnna 6 years ago from Guildford

      Eiddwen thank you for sharing that with me. I am so pleased you have now found Dai and I hope you will be blessed with wonderful love and a blissfully happy life together. To be married to a violent bully whether emotional or physical bullying must be a prison sentence. I am so pleased you escaped.

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      Dave Sibole 6 years ago from Leesburg, Oh

      Another joyful read. Thanks.

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      Eiddwen 6 years ago from Wales

      Hi acaetnna,

      What a beautiful and heartfelt poem. I am so pleased for you. I can also add that I was married for 26years to a violent bully, but I left him in 2002 and said that I would never get involved again. But I met Dai and he has been my partner for five years now and that poem could have been from me to him or vice versa. He had also had a very long but unhappy marriage and I count myself as very lucky to have found him.

      So enjoy your life and I am so glad to have got to know you. By the way I give this one an up and awesome.

      Take care my friend .

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      acaetnna 6 years ago from Guildford

      Thanks Stricktlydating, great to see you here again.

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      StricktlyDating 6 years ago from Australia

      Very sweet poem!

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      acaetnna 6 years ago from Guildford

      I am so sorry your love has gone, but I agree he will always be in your heart, just as anyone who has truly loved will keep their love forever in their heart. Thank you for reading my poem Denise.

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      Denise Handlon 6 years ago from North Carolina

      Lovely, romantic poem. YOu are fortunate to have a love that is missed in this way. My love is gone, but I carry him in my heart.

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      acaetnna 6 years ago from Guildford

      Gosh what a truly wonderful comment, I so appreciate that. No I have never thought of publishing anything! I only wrote my first poem about two months ago and published it on here, I don't really consider myself to be a proper poet! I am still learning but enjoying every minute of being in this friendly environment on Hubpages, people are just so lovely. I am totally flattered that you think I could do that though and so appreciate you reading my poem and making such lovely comments.I am just popping over to your hubs now though.

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      @MagicBoy 6 years ago from Qatar

      Have you thought of publishing your work of art..or have you already..Hope I am not missing anything here..great work and wonderfully written, coming from a writer who has such lovely thoughts..Could melt any reader's heart.. cheers..

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      acaetnna 6 years ago from Guildford

      Truly wonderful comments, thank you Erin. You really dn't know what your lovely comment really mean to me. Thank you. I am now sure to visit your hubs too.

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      Erin LeFey 6 years ago from Maryland

      Thank you so much for sharing a piece of your life and love for those of us bouncing around the hub looking for warmth and happiness in the pages of the faces we follow. Brightest Blessings to you Both. I'm feeling Lovely :)

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      acaetnna 6 years ago from Guildford

      Thanks Money Glitch (great name!) I so appreciate your comment. Yes I always think that pictures always make all the difference.

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      Money Glitch 6 years ago from Texas

      Very nice poem and love the pictures that spice it up. Awesome tribute to the one you love. :)

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      acaetnna 6 years ago from Guildford

      Well I do hope that you and your fiance will be together very soon. Remember he is always present in your heart but to be without his physical touch is so difficult isn't it. Thank you for reading my poem, hope you'll be back when you have time to read some more.

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      acaetnna 6 years ago from Guildford

      Thank you Amy, it is a wonderful feeling, I do hope you are experiencing it too.

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      PurpleOne 6 years ago from Canada

      This captures the way I feel about my fiancee perfectly. Right now him and I are apart but will be together soon again.

      Good luck with having your baby! I want one too. :)

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      AmyTaylor 6 years ago

      oh to feel love the way you do. your so full of love it overflows into your writing...absolutly beautiful job

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      acaetnna 6 years ago from Guildford

      Wow thank you so much Mark.

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      acaetnna 6 years ago from Guildford

      Elefanza yes it would be so wonderful, thank you.

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      acaetnna 6 years ago from Guildford

      RNMSN yes to read love letters over and over certainly bring back wonderful memories. I have treasured every word he has ever written to me. I have several boxes all tied with satin ribbon! Great to have your comments RNMSN, please take care of yourself.

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      Elefanza 6 years ago from Somewhere in My Brain

      Hoping for a baby...so beautiful!

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      Barbara Bethard 6 years ago from Tucson, Az

      I still have all the love notes my David wrote just a few short 30 years ago :)

      and they still make me cry with happiness when I read them over again!

      Knowing you have your soul mate is a precious thing...it is still a lot of hard work, dont get me wrong but your words bring back all those wonderful first love feelings and they just grow deeper with every year!!

      You are truly a gifted wordsmith acaetnna!!!

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      acaetnna 6 years ago from Guildford

      You are right Richtwf, the world I believe would be a far better place if we could all learn to love. Love having you here Richtwf, thank you so much.

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      richtwf 6 years ago

      Sensuous words of love, if we had more of you in the world sharing words like these then I'm sure the world would be a more peaceful and loving place. Keep spreading the word of love Lady A!

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      acaetnna 6 years ago from Guildford

      Generous words from you Craan, thank you so very much.

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      Sheila Craan 6 years ago from Florida

      Your words are mesmerizing! Love is so grand! You eloquently create the feeling that captures hearts. Congratulations!

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      acaetnna 6 years ago from Guildford

      Thank you Secretmission, I appreciate your words.