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Perfectly said the first time

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    Sunny Baldwinposted 7 years ago

    Poetry is heaven sent
              unchangable flowing from my pen
              not erased and then placed again
              someplace close to my original thought,
              but not the same I find
              when perfectly said the first time.

    1. words cocktail profile image60
      words cocktailposted 7 years ago in reply to this

      wow..well written-instant & straight
      it was so 'feel alike' to read this..thanks!

    2. prettydarkhorse profile image63
      prettydarkhorseposted 7 years ago in reply to this

      Poetry is from the heart
      It starts from there and above
      it flows far and beyond
      Reaching its heart out
      even though sometimes you may doubt
      what life is all about

      1. words cocktail profile image60
        words cocktailposted 7 years ago in reply to this

        Wow to you too prettyDH smile
        I liked it..just the way
        it simply came out..
        very precise!

        1. prettydarkhorse profile image63
          prettydarkhorseposted 7 years ago in reply to this

          yes it does, you seem to be very good at poems too, i checked your hubs...

  2. free4india profile image62
    free4indiaposted 7 years ago

    Poets have poetic license !

 
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