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I'm right here.

  1. chrissie123 profile image61
    chrissie123posted 8 years ago

    I can see through your bloodshot eyes.
    I can tell you're tired.
    You have given up.
    Bet you thought I'd back down.

    I can see right through you.
    Its not that hard. You think you're so complex,but your not.
    I'd give anything to see you smile again.
    I know you're in pain.
    I'm here and I'm your friend.

    I can see you're upset. I have always had that power.
    You don't have to pretend. Life is to short to keep everything locked in. I'll be right here because im your friend.

    Even as days pass us by. I'll be here for you. I will comfort you if you need to cry.

    I can see right through you.
    Its not that hard. YOu think you're so complex,but your not.
    I'd give anything to see you smile again.
    I know you're in pain.
    I'm here and I'm your friend.

    1. nikki1 profile image59
      nikki1posted 8 years agoin reply to this

      This so beautiful ;-)

  2. AEvans profile image79
    AEvansposted 8 years ago

    Now that is a beautiful poem If it were mine I would have published it as a hub, many would enjoy it. smile

  3. DrPPoorluk profile image61
    DrPPoorlukposted 8 years ago

    She's right you know. You should throw that into a hub. It is very nice.

    1. AEvans profile image79
      AEvansposted 8 years agoin reply to this

      I had to dig through the unanswered hubs I needed something refreshing and I fell upon your assweeds hub it was hilarious!!! big_smile

      1. Raven King profile image61
        Raven Kingposted 8 years agoin reply to this

        I enjoyed that one too! Cheers to Dr.PPoorluk's poem Assweeds

  4. DrPPoorluk profile image61
    DrPPoorlukposted 8 years ago

    Thanks again Ladies! Glad you liked it.

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    Crazdwriterposted 8 years ago

    very nice poem and I agree should have been a hub

  6. chrissie123 profile image61
    chrissie123posted 8 years ago

    Thank you all so much!! i will make this a hub! XD

  7. chrissie123 profile image61
    chrissie123posted 8 years ago

    I Did it!!! I made it a hub!!!

 
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