I have a ton of lyrics, but none finished yet as a song, anybody interested in collaborating, hit me me up.
Latest one is called "Stuck in paradise"
The golden cage is closing in
The diamond chain is getting tight
The clouds beneath me fall apart
been elevated by a lie
I can't believe this is the place
My dreams have sent me to
I can't believe this is the day
My nightmare has come true
Stuck in Paradise
I can't get out of here this time
stuck in paradise
I can't get out of here
I'm stuck in paradise
I can't get out,
I can't get out of here I'm
Stuck in paradise
get me out of here
Is this where I'm meant to be?
Is this the way I'm meant to feel?
Is this the time and the place
OK the last 3 lines sucked, so I stop. Who can help me?
not that bad. the three lines , i mean .
Is this how it must be ?
Haha, well I can definitely appreciate someone who can write a song. For me, it's one of the hardest writing tasks, because my brain keeps going "What about the tune?" and so the words just end up being poetry or following the basic riff of some classic rock song, haha. I've managed to tinker out a few decent lyrical things in the past, but only because I got so drawn into a storyline I was writing for one of my books that I could just so clearly hear the music that I knew exactly where the words would go.
Looks like you're off to a good start though. Keep at it!
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