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I want people to be warned

  1. tamron profile image73
    tamronposted 5 years ago

    I have no comments and 17 views.  I just don't want anybody else going through what I had to
    go through.  I published this a little over a week ago.  What improvement should I make?

    http://tamron.hubpages.com/hub/Warning- … ou-in-Jail

    Don't be shy!  I need your help so nobody is in that position.

  2. WryLilt profile image90
    WryLiltposted 5 years ago

    Turn "Electric" in the title into "Electricity."

    Add a "Made For Pinterest" image top right with a scary heading like "How People Can Steal Your Electricity Legally - How To Stop Them."

    Add some dot points to break it up.

    Add another image further down of a boat or electricity related item.

    Change the Me in "How I Finally Evicted the Man Stealing My Electric from Me Boat Dock" to My.

    1. tamron profile image73
      tamronposted 5 years agoin reply to this

      Thanks baby your right i will get with it. not tonight its my birthday and i am not in any shape to write right now.

      1. Redberry Sky profile image96
        Redberry Skyposted 5 years agoin reply to this

        Happy birthday Tamron smile

  3. JakeFrost profile image61
    JakeFrostposted 5 years ago

    Yea Happy Birthday, I think continue with what WryLilt said and see if that helps

    Also, you could add it as your featured artricle