Constructive Criticism Please!

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    B A N K A I guyposted 5 years ago … ggest-Scam can someone please tell me anything can do too improve the structure of this, and the content. As I am going to start to use this structure on all of my new hubs.

    Thank you.

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      Millionaire Tipsposted 5 years agoin reply to this

      This is a great hub, but I personally wouldn't use the same structure on all of my hubs, since different ones tend to lend themselves to different formats.

      I like that you have different modules, and have subtitles.  That makes it easier to read.  I also like the fact that you added photographs and videos to break up the pace. And you picked a good, interesting topic.

      On this one, I would change the following things:
      1.  Include the name Bernie Madoff in the title.  Google uses titles to find your hub, and while the current title is good for a magazine article and piquing our interest, it won't work for online articles.

      2.  Don't put three videos in a row.  There's got to be some writing in between so we remember it is a hub we are reading.

      3.  Below the video, you don't have any additional interesting things - no photos, no interesting sidenotes, etc.  I would add something for visual interest.

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        B A N K A I guyposted 5 years agoin reply to this

        Edited it, thanks for the advice. Any more suggestions or issues with the new layout?