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I'd like feedback on my Hub: All about Walkie-Talkies

  1. Shehabzaza profile image60
    Shehabzazaposted 2 years ago

    Hi Hubbers,

    I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my Hub All about Walkie-Talkies. What can I do to improve? Thanks!

    1. Stacie L profile image89
      Stacie Lposted 2 years agoin reply to this

      After a scan of your Hub, I can tell you that your first introductory paragraph is one long run-on sentence. Please break it up into smaller ones.
      Second, the use of the term"walkie-talkie" is mentioned too much.
      Take the photo credit off as well.
      How about some photos, videos and maybe a poll?
      That's all I'll suggest; maybe some others can chime in.

  2. Shehabzaza profile image60
    Shehabzazaposted 2 years ago

    Thank you so much, that was a great help.

  3. Thish profile image82
    Thishposted 2 years ago

    I just had a quick read on your hub.
    - Use bullet points given in the text capsule for your point form texts than using the keyboard *infront of each point
    - Also this hub clearly needs atleast 2 more photos.
    -The way you have given the photo credit seems incorrect seems as a search result URL in google search. There is a help guide in hubpages pn how to credit the photos.
    hope this helps.

  4. Shehabzaza profile image60
    Shehabzazaposted 2 years ago

    Yes you actually did help thank you.

 
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