I'd like feedback on my hub - How to Have Perfect ABS?

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  1. ciutysmant profile image78
    ciutysmantposted 3 years ago

    Hello everyone,

    This is my third hub and, in my opinion, best of all. However, I am not experienced yet, I registered here just a week ago, so I would love to get some feedback, any comments are appreciated! Thank you!

  2. psycheskinner profile image82
    psycheskinnerposted 3 years ago

    "ABS" suggests an acronym. I suggest the title or first sentence should be "abdominals" or at least "abs".

  3. ciutysmant profile image78
    ciutysmantposted 3 years ago

    Thanks! I changed it.

  4. relache profile image86
    relacheposted 3 years ago

    ABS is an acronym that most commonly stands for Antilock Braking System or Acrylonitrile butadiene styrene (a type of plastic) when used in American/US English.

    You should not be using that abbreviation in all capital letters anywhere in your article.

    1. ciutysmant profile image78
      ciutysmantposted 3 years agoin reply to this

      Thanks, I fixed that.

  5. Millionaire Tips profile image92
    Millionaire Tipsposted 3 years ago

    I found your hub through looking at your pictures.

    http://ciutysmant.hubpages.com/hub/How- … BS-Visible

    I noticed that you had a lot of links to youtube videos.  There is a limit of two links to any one site, but I'm not sure if youtube has an exception to that rule. 

    I think it is a good hub overall, but I would recommend that you review the hub again for grammar and clarity.

    1. ciutysmant profile image78
      ciutysmantposted 3 years agoin reply to this

      Thank you, I will will review it!

    2. Marisa Wright profile image97
      Marisa Wrightposted 3 years agoin reply to this

      There is no limit to the number of Youtube videos.

      1. Millionaire Tips profile image92
        Millionaire Tipsposted 3 years agoin reply to this

        Marisa, they aren't videos, but links to videos. I'm not sure if that makes a difference.

        1. Marisa Wright profile image97
          Marisa Wrightposted 3 years agoin reply to this

          I should have said, there is no limit to the number of Youtube capsules.   If you're just putting links in the text, that could be a different story - though I can't imagine why you'd want to do that.   It's just sending the reader off to Youtube to watch the clip, which means they may not come back to click on an ad.

          1. ciutysmant profile image78
            ciutysmantposted 3 years agoin reply to this

            The reason I did this is that I want to show readers how to do an exercise. There are about 10 exercises, so I don't think it would be a great idea to create 10 YouTube capsules.

            1. Millionaire Tips profile image92
              Millionaire Tipsposted 3 years agoin reply to this

              I think that the links to the youtube videos were presented well in your hub.  Make sure that they are from different sources, so you aren't inadvertently leading everyone to the same place. Then you may want to write the staff to ask them for more guidance. They may waive that rule for you in this instance.

 
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