I'd like feedback on my hub - How to Have Perfect ABS?

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   ciutysmantposted 9 years ago

   Hello everyone,
   
   This is my third hub and, in my opinion, best of all. However, I am not experienced yet, I registered here just a week ago, so I would love to get some feedback, any comments are appreciated! Thank you!

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   psycheskinnerposted 9 years ago

   "ABS" suggests an acronym. I suggest the title or first sentence should be "abdominals" or at least "abs".

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   ciutysmantposted 9 years ago

   Thanks! I changed it.

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   relacheposted 9 years ago

   ABS is an acronym that most commonly stands for Antilock Braking System or Acrylonitrile butadiene styrene (a type of plastic) when used in American/US English.
   
   You should not be using that abbreviation in all capital letters anywhere in your article.

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      ciutysmantposted 9 years agoin reply to this

      Thanks, I fixed that.

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   Millionaire Tipsposted 9 years ago

   I found your hub through looking at your pictures.
   
   http://ciutysmant.hubpages.com/hub/How- … BS-Visible
   
   I noticed that you had a lot of links to youtube videos.  There is a limit of two links to any one site, but I'm not sure if youtube has an exception to that rule. 
   
   I think it is a good hub overall, but I would recommend that you review the hub again for grammar and clarity.

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      ciutysmantposted 9 years agoin reply to this

      Thank you, I will will review it!

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      Marisa Wrightposted 9 years agoin reply to this

      There is no limit to the number of Youtube videos.

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         Millionaire Tipsposted 9 years agoin reply to this

         Marisa, they aren't videos, but links to videos. I'm not sure if that makes a difference.

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            Marisa Wrightposted 9 years agoin reply to this

            I should have said, there is no limit to the number of Youtube capsules.   If you're just putting links in the text, that could be a different story - though I can't imagine why you'd want to do that.   It's just sending the reader off to Youtube to watch the clip, which means they may not come back to click on an ad.

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               ciutysmantposted 9 years agoin reply to this

               The reason I did this is that I want to show readers how to do an exercise. There are about 10 exercises, so I don't think it would be a great idea to create 10 YouTube capsules.

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                  Millionaire Tipsposted 9 years agoin reply to this

                  I think that the links to the youtube videos were presented well in your hub.  Make sure that they are from different sources, so you aren't inadvertently leading everyone to the same place. Then you may want to write the staff to ask them for more guidance. They may waive that rule for you in this instance.

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