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I'd like feedback regarding the quality of my hub...

  1. AVailuu profile image81
    AVailuuposted 2 years ago

    Using Surgical Intervention to Treat Obesity: from the Georgia State Assembly for Surgical Technologists 2014

    http://availuu.hubpages.com/hub/Weight- … gists-2014

  2. relache profile image90
    relacheposted 2 years ago

    Your Hub seems to contained a lot of unrelated links.  That is to say, unrelated as defined by current standards of internet relevancy.

    1. AVailuu profile image81
      AVailuuposted 2 years agoin reply to this

      I was going for a.. "for more information...." type of approach with all the links.. is it obnoxious?

      1. Marisa Wright profile image98
        Marisa Wrightposted 2 years agoin reply to this

        Not obnoxious, but not allowed under HubPages rules.   All links in a Hub must be directly related to the subject.   Tangentially related is not allowed.

        1. AVailuu profile image81
          AVailuuposted 2 years agoin reply to this

          oh! so things like definitions are okay?

          1. relache profile image90
            relacheposted 2 years agoin reply to this

            I would think definition links would be considered tangential.

  3. sockii profile image79
    sockiiposted 2 years ago

    Given this article seems to be about a particular lecture and argument about a specific medical subject, links that would help back up the argument and points you are raising should be directly related **to that lecture**. Not general articles on bariatric surgery posted to merriam-webster.com or mayoclinic.org that are not directly related to the lecturer's supposed arguments. Without direct references there's really nothing to support the statements presented as being from the source they are supposedly from.

 
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