I'd like feedback on my Hub: Islam Is The Religion Of Peace And Love

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   M Asif Jameelposted 9 years ago

   Hi Hubbers,
   
   I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my Hub Islam Is The Religion Of Peace And Love. What can I do to improve? Thanks!

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      cherylvanceposted 9 years agoin reply to this

      I feel if you start out by excusing yourself for the broken English and word usage, this would prepare your readers. I agree with Millionaire Tips ... You have a great message to share. Just need some brushing up on the sentences & paragraphs. As far as the images ... I don't see anything wrong with them. Unless it is their authorization. Hope this helps.

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         M Asif Jameelposted 9 years agoin reply to this

         thank you

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   relacheposted 9 years ago

   http://hubpages.com/learningcenter/How- … y-of-a-Hub

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   psycheskinnerposted 9 years ago

   You have pixelated images

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      M Asif Jameelposted 9 years agoin reply to this

      thank you very much

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   Millionaire Tipsposted 9 years ago

   You have an important message to share and I am glad you are sharing it.
   
   I think the biggest issue with the hub is the format.  You have long paragraphs.  People on the internet like to read shorter sentences and short paragraphs. 
   
   Next, you will also want to review the hub for grammar issues.   You have run-on sentences.
   
   Finally, you will want to check your images.  The images you have provided look like copyrighted images, and they are pixelated, as psycheskinner pointed out. There is a hub in the Learning Center about legal image use, and you should read it thoroughly. Use only images that are legal to use and note the source in a way that shows that they are legal to use.

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      M Asif Jameelposted 9 years agoin reply to this

      thanks a lot

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   Suhail and my dogposted 9 years ago

   Hi,
   
   It is a very informative article. I liked it very much indeed.
   
   Few suggestions from me:
   
   1. Break your long sentences into smaller ones.
   2. Break your long paragraphs into short ones and preferably give bold titles to most of them
   3. Use lots of pictures and if they are not yours, do always give the credit (source name, url, etc.)
   4. Read some helpful hubs that others have highlighted in their responses.
   
   I wish you the best of luck.

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      M Asif Jameelposted 9 years agoin reply to this

      thanks a lot

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