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NEED FEEDBACK ON MY HUB 'HOW TO REDUCE WEIGHT EFFECTIVELY'

  1. Rituparna Biswas profile image60
    Rituparna Biswasposted 2 years ago

    Hello everybody. Please give me some feedback on my 1st hub How to Reduce Weight Effectively. Also give me some tips on how to improve my hubs.

    1. psycheskinner profile image83
      psycheskinnerposted 2 years ago

      Your hub seems unfocussed to me and you sort of lost me the second you went for the spurious "magic weight loss" drinks.  IMHO you could have a hub on conventional weight loss, or you could have a hub trying to explain why the weird recipes might actually help with weight loss.  But I would suggest not combining the two.

      Also you need to use pictures that are no copyright/watermarked.  Try foter.com and search for commercial licenses.

      1. Rituparna Biswas profile image60
        Rituparna Biswasposted 2 years agoin reply to this

        ok. Thanks for the feedback.

    2. erorantes profile image52
      erorantesposted 2 years ago

      I like your hub. I saw some of your hub's picture in other hubs.  You need to check your grammar. The puntuation and spelling needs to be perfect. You need to go to the learning center in the hubpages wave site. You need to create your own pictures.Good luck with your writing.

      1. Rituparna Biswas profile image60
        Rituparna Biswasposted 2 years agoin reply to this

        Thanks a lot for your valuable feedback.

     
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