I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my Hub lose 22 lbs (10 Kilos) in a month! (must be signed in to view). What can I do to improve? Thanks!
Losing weight is a very saturated topic. Maybe add something unique and call it an unusual name.
Did you really mean eat 3 cans of chickpeas in one day? That's a lot of chickpeas.
Seems like you(or hubpages) have deleted your hub as I'm not able to find that.
That diet hub recommends eating strategies that are known to be unhealthy, and makes unverified weight loss claims about some foods. You'll want to amend those sections if you want to pass QAP.
well I Have personally tried this diet and it works! So I don't think the strategies used are unhealthy.
You need to be specific about quantities. For example, I doubt a can of chickpeas in the US holds the same as a can in the UK. Remember your audience is global.
A 'few' pieces of chicken is a bit vague. A few might be a couple of ounces or half a pound.
'Glasses of milk'... how big are the glasses?
You say to aim for 1200 calories a day but that would be hard to do on boiled eggs, boiled chicken and salad. It looks to me more like 700 calories per day.
You should 'Capitalize your Title' - you have it in lower case, which looks sloppy. The exclamation mark is unnecessary.
Did you actually lose 10 k in a month? If so discuss it, if not change the title.
Aside from the fact that losing that amount of weight in a month is incredibly unhealthy, there are a lot of grammatical errors in your hub. The claims are unsubstantiated. I would include actual, before and after photos of yourself to prove the effectiveness of the diet. Also, include a warning to consult a doctor. theraggededge had some great tips for you as well. Your plan is incredibly vague, and does not include portion sizes. I have done a diet similar to this, and had a fully laid out plan, but only claimed a weight loss of 10 lbs over the course of a month, and it was only safe to do for a week or two.
by Purches Power3 months ago
Hi Hubbers,This article has not passed QAP. Though it has a higher score than my previous articles. I have had no input as to why it hasn't passed, I've proofread it and the grammar is spot on, photos are available for...
by Highway Ent13 months ago
Hi Hubbers,this is Highway Ent I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my Hub and let me know what I need to correct in order for my article to be...
by Juvy Sumalinog4 years ago
With all the weight loss programs out there, I have not found something that says "it's safe for a breastfeeding mom"... I have some problems with my weight. I was actually slim (around 47 to 50 kilos) before...
by Praveen15422 months ago
Hi Hubbers,I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my Hub Top 10 Tips On Weight Loss (must be signed in to view). What can I do to improve? Thanks!
by prof m v lakshmi devi6 months ago
Hi Hubbers,I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my Hub Expectations from a Wife (must be signed in to view). What can I do to improve? Thanks!
by Simone Haruko Smith5 years ago
In our latest blog post, we've shared James Edmondson's early designs for an updated Hub layout and profile page. Check out the blog post for a more detailed explanation of various aspects of each page. But...
Copyright © 2017 HubPages Inc. and respective owners.
Other product and company names shown may be trademarks of their respective owners.
HubPages® is a registered Service Mark of HubPages, Inc.
HubPages and Hubbers (authors) may earn revenue on this page based on affiliate relationships and advertisements with partners including Amazon, Google, and others.