I'd like feedback on my Hub: lose 22 lbs (10 Kilos) in a month!

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    Ayush1posted 2 years ago

    Hi Hubbers,

    I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my Hub lose 22 lbs (10 Kilos) in a month! (must be signed in to view). What can I do to improve? Thanks!

    1. Stacie L profile image88
      Stacie Lposted 2 years agoin reply to this

      Losing weight is a very saturated topic. Maybe add something unique and call it an unusual name.

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        Ayush1posted 2 years agoin reply to this

        Can you please suggest any other title?

    2. lovetherain profile image81
      lovetherainposted 2 years agoin reply to this

      Did you really mean eat 3 cans of chickpeas in one day? That's a lot of chickpeas.

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        Ayush1posted 2 years agoin reply to this

        Yes! 3 cans throughout the day is actually less.

    3. DevjeetSingh profile image61
      DevjeetSinghposted 2 years agoin reply to this

      Seems like you(or hubpages) have deleted your hub as I'm not able to find that.

  2. relache profile image87
    relacheposted 2 years ago

    That diet hub recommends eating strategies that are known to be unhealthy, and makes unverified weight loss claims about some foods.  You'll want to amend those sections if you want to pass QAP.

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      Ayush1posted 2 years agoin reply to this

      well I Have personally tried this diet and it works! So I don't think the strategies used are unhealthy.

      1. relache profile image87
        relacheposted 2 years agoin reply to this

        Your opinion is not enough to satisfy US legal claims, you need to show your data and proof, otherwise HubPages may very well decide not to pass the Hub in order to protect their own legal responsibilities.

  3. theraggededge profile image99
    theraggededgeposted 2 years ago

    You need to be specific about quantities. For example, I doubt a can of chickpeas in the US holds the same as a can in the UK. Remember your audience is global.

    A 'few' pieces of chicken is a bit vague. A few might be a couple of ounces or half a pound.

    'Glasses of milk'... how big are the glasses?

    You say to aim for 1200 calories a day but that would be hard to do on boiled eggs, boiled chicken and salad. It looks to me more like 700 calories per day.

    You should 'Capitalize your Title' - you have it in lower case, which looks sloppy. The exclamation mark is unnecessary.

    Good luck.

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      Ayush1posted 2 years agoin reply to this

      Alright. I will start working on it. Thank you smile

  4. psycheskinner profile image81
    psycheskinnerposted 2 years ago

    Did you actually lose 10 k in a month?  If so discuss it, if not change the title.

  5. Anna Marie Bowman profile image90
    Anna Marie Bowmanposted 2 years ago

    Aside from the fact that losing that amount of weight in a month is incredibly unhealthy, there are a lot of grammatical errors in your hub.  The claims are unsubstantiated. I would include actual, before and after photos of yourself to prove the effectiveness of the diet.  Also, include a warning to consult a doctor.  theraggededge had some great tips for you as well.  Your plan is incredibly vague, and does not include portion sizes.  I have done a diet similar to this, and had a fully laid out plan, but only claimed a weight loss of 10 lbs over the course of a month, and it was only safe to do for a week or two.

 
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