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I'd like feedback on my Hub: Society : Challenges, Issues, Perspectives

  1. Kritee Mahanti profile image80
    Kritee Mahantiposted 2 years ago

    Hi Hubbers,

    I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my Hub Society : Challenges, Issues, Perspectives (must be signed in to view). What can I do to improve? Thanks!

  2. psycheskinner profile image82
    psycheskinnerposted 2 years ago

    For a start you should put a space after every comma and every full stop.

    Then think: is this just something I want to say, or is there an audience who will be helped by reading it?

  3. loche profile image71
    locheposted 2 years ago

    HI Kritee,
    There are quite a  few grammatical/ punctuation mistakes in your hub. Please proofread the text prior to publishing.

  4. peeples profile image86
    peeplesposted 2 years ago

    To add to what has already been said, your article is not broken up into multiple headers, your pictures are not sourced, not one picture is full width, and your article is a bit short. When in edit mode you can look at the top right side and you will see some suggestions of how to make it better. More than 700 words, with tables, maps, or polls, and 3 attributed photos.

 
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