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I'd like feedback on my article: The Traveling to Egypt part 1

  1. Ayman Atef profile image61
    Ayman Atefposted 4 weeks ago

    Hi Hubbers,

    I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my article The Traveling to Egypt part 1 (must be signed in to view). What can I do to improve? Thanks!

    1. Jeremy Gill profile image89
      Jeremy Gillposted 4 weeks ago in reply to this

      Ayman, I'm going to be honest with you. This isn't a Hub. It's three pictures interspersed with a few short sentences ridden with grammar errors.

      To get featured, you need to write much more about an informative topic you're familiar with. Aim for at least 700 words, proofread, and don't make all your text bold. Once you're there, we can give you more specific tips.

      1. Ayman Atef profile image61
        Ayman Atefposted 4 weeks ago in reply to this

        Could you help me to publish it
        What is the grammar errors
        And what can I do else

        1. theraggededge profile image96
          theraggededgeposted 4 weeks ago in reply to this

          No, it's not publishable as it is.

          Read the advice already given to you.

          Spend some time learning what HubPages requires: http://hubpages.com/help-wizard/

  2. pen promulgates profile image79
    pen promulgatesposted 4 weeks ago

    Your pictures are good. By including a little bit of history, uniqueness about the places, why they are famous. What tourists like about them. How safe the places are etc etc, elaborate the content and write a grammatical error free write-up.

  3. psycheskinner profile image80
    psycheskinnerposted 4 weeks ago

    The pictures appear elsewhere online, do you have permission to use them?

    1. Ayman Atef profile image61
      Ayman Atefposted 3 weeks ago in reply to this

      Deleted

      1. theraggededge profile image96
        theraggededgeposted 3 weeks ago in reply to this

        You can't republish photos you find on the internet unless they are legal-to use. You could receive a demand for payment for unauthorized use.

        https://hubpageshelp.com/content/Learni … -image-use

        If you want to be a writer here, you need to spend time doing your research.

        https://hubpages.com/faq/

      2. Marketing Merit profile image88
        Marketing Meritposted 3 weeks ago in reply to this

        Most photos on Google are copyrighted. You can't use them without permission or you could be sued. You should use photos you have taken yourself, ones that are free for commercial use or are in the public domain.
        Search the Hubpages help page if you need more info on this.

  4. Ayman Atef profile image61
    Ayman Atefposted 3 weeks ago

    I will put my photo
    taken by me or my brother

  5. yogaburnclub profile image85
    yogaburnclubposted 3 weeks ago

    Thanks this is a nice article and the pictures look wonderful.If you want to improve it  you can start with the title.This is where you will illustrate more about Egypt.There is so much that is in Egypt that we would like to know,but in this article what specific thing will you address.

    Then have a nice introduction that is catchy and will make me want to read the rest of the article.Its important to break your work into subtitles that will make it easy for hubbers to read.Remember most of the readers have limited time to read the entire article.They usually run through the article then you should ask yourself what are this key topics that i do not want them to miss.

    For the pictures they are great but you can also include captions of brief description of the pictures.Make your work flow and interesting from top to bottom.Otherwise you are doing great and i wish you all the best.

    1. Ayman Atef profile image61
      Ayman Atefposted 3 weeks ago in reply to this

      thank you so much
      I dont know what can I write in summery
      couId YOU HELP me

 
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