They look good, but I agree with AEvans. Add some Amazon and Ebay capsules and maybe a news feed. Perhaps not with the poetry (I don't with my artistic work) but with the weight loss hub, go for it! It won't hurt your revenue and it can also help to attract more people to your hubs!
AEvans & Everyday Miracles -
Thank you soooo much for your honest feedback! I will take your advice. Thanks a ton for taking the time to read & give it. You guys r the Bee's knees!
Good once keep witting. Also put ebay capsules somewhat upper side of ur hub. You can include 2 E bay capsules.
Yep, as many have said, you're missing some capsules for potential profit. But experiment with this stuff before you go willy-nilly...at least, that's my advice. Make sure your money making advertisements correlate well with the document.
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