A request for feedback please!

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  1. CrystalStarWoman profile image58
    CrystalStarWomanposted 8 years ago

    I have just written what feels like my first 'proper' hub.

    My style of writing seems to be different from others and I don't know if it works...

    I would really appreciate some feedback please - to see if I'm on the right track?

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    1. shanekruger profile image57
      shanekrugerposted 8 years agoin reply to this

      Nice Work!

      1. CrystalStarWoman profile image58
        CrystalStarWomanposted 8 years agoin reply to this

        Thanks - but I have just received a message from Hubpages - they've 'unpublished' it for violation of the Terms of Use sad

        I have to re-do it all and then submit it for publication again.

        I think I have also been 'told off' for putting the link to the hub here on this forum?

        I am so confused...

  2. Dame Scribe profile image60
    Dame Scribeposted 8 years ago

    First, Welcome to HubPages! smile I think the Hub is great. smile it's well laid out except a little skimpy on the tags and maybe move your Amazon capsule to where people will see it rather than at the bottom where it will most likely be entirely missed. smile

    1. CrystalStarWoman profile image58
      CrystalStarWomanposted 8 years agoin reply to this

      Thank you so much for your welcome and advice! I have added tags and moved amazon capsules smile

      I really appreciate your help!

      Next I need to find out about these RSS feeds which I don't understand at all!

  3. creation75 profile image56
    creation75posted 8 years ago

    Nicely arranged. Dame scribe is quite right. If possible add some more tag. You can also add news capsule, which will help a lot.

    1. CrystalStarWoman profile image58
      CrystalStarWomanposted 8 years agoin reply to this

      Thank you! I hadn't even noticed the news capsule!

      I have added one - though not sure how to get the right keywords. If I add more than one it doesn't seem to work? I shall have to look into those a bit more...

      Thanks again for the advice smile


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