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I'd like feedback on my Hub: Red White and The Blues?

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    Abe Lernerposted 20 months ago

    Hi Hubbers,

    I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my Hub Red White and The Blues? (must be signed in to view). What can I do to improve? Thanks!

  2. Chatty Chat profile image89
    Chatty Chatposted 20 months ago

    The title doesn't say what the hub is about. "Red, Whites, and The Blues" doesn't explain anything about dogs and fireworks.

    The wording is off in some of your sentences. Make sure you thoroughly edit the hub before you republish it.

    Add some high-quality photos. Make sure you can legally use the photos.

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      Abe Lernerposted 20 months agoin reply to this

      Good Morning,
      Thanks for your critique.
      Regarding the title not saying what the hub is about-
      Isn't the subtitle providing that information? Does HubPages frown upon cute titles? Thanks again, Abe Lerner

      1. theraggededge profile image100
        theraggededgeposted 20 months agoin reply to this

        Your readers (& Google) need to know what the hub is about. That's the work of your title. So, something like, "Caring for Your Dog on 4th July" would do far better and tells the erstwhile searcher what they can expect when they click on your hub.

        A better approach would be to make your hub 'evergreen' by heading it up, "Your Pet and Fireworks: Coping Strategies", and then you can include other dates, such as New Year's Eve.

        Edit: your hub could do with being a bit longer and you need to add some relevant images. Also invite comments from your readers - like how they deal with their pets on the 4th.