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I'd like feedback on my Hub: How can teenage girls lose weight safely

  1. nasser deep profile image78
    nasser deepposted 12 months ago

    Hi Hubbers,

    I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my Hub How can teenage girls lose weight safely. What can I do to improve? Thanks!

    1. theraggededge profile image95
      theraggededgeposted 12 months ago in reply to this

      I think the problems are mainly to do with formatting and presentation.

      Use Title Case in your title and subheadings.

      Take out the manual bullet points and use the ones available in the text module.

      Go through the text and tidy up - missing capital letters at the beginning of sentences, commas in the wrong place.

      Read the text out loud to pick up any other errors in spelling, phrasing, missing/extra words etc. I can see quite a few scattered through the article.

      Improve the images and make sure you link back to the source. All images must be legal to use.

      Add a text capsule, placed to the right-hand side with a blue background to display your credentials in relation to this topic - you are giving medical advice so you should tell people you have a medical degree (and in which field of medicine you specialize).

      Hope that helps.

      1. nasser deep profile image78
        nasser deepposted 12 months ago in reply to this

        Thanks a million for your advice. It's a great help indeed.

  2. umm e ammara profile image60
    umm e ammaraposted 12 months ago

    Dancing for 20 minutes in a day can help you loosing your weight

 
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