I'd like feedback on my Hub: Water:The Story of life

  1. Skian profile image49
    Skianposted 18 months ago

    Hi Hubbers,

    I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my Hub Water:The Story of life. What can I do to improve? Thanks!

    1. theraggededge profile image100
      theraggededgeposted 18 months agoin reply to this

      Skian, this is a really interesting topic and it is easy to see that you know a lot about it. However, it seems as though you wrote it in your native language and then used a translation tool to turn it into English.

      You need to spend some time improving your written English skills. There are many websites that can help you. I found this one: http://www.englishonlinelearning.in/lea … guaes.html

      We don't want you to keep wasting your time, writing long hubs that won't be approved or featured because of poor English.