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I'd like feedback on my Hub: The murder- a short story

  1. Daanish jalhotra profile image73
    Daanish jalhotraposted 2 years ago

    Hi Hubbers,

    I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my Hub The murder- a short story (must be signed in to view). What can I do to improve? Thanks!

    1. Marisa Wright profile image95
      Marisa Wrightposted 2 years ago in reply to this

      To be accepted, stories must have good English grammar and spelling.  Try copying your story into Word or a grammar/spell checker, and you'll find that you have many mistakes.

    2. Alison Dittmar profile image61
      Alison Dittmarposted 2 years ago in reply to this

      Generally speaking you must first read your own work through, checking for spelling and grammar. For example, in the first sentence I believe the word I is not capitalized (i) I is always capitalized.  Make corrections and you'll have a good story. Good luck.

  2. relache profile image86
    relacheposted 2 years ago

    If you use this article like a checklist, you will easily find areas of your Hub to improve.

    http://hubpages.com/learningcenter/How- … y-of-a-Hub

  3. Daanish jalhotra profile image73
    Daanish jalhotraposted 2 years ago

    thanks!

 
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