I'd like feedback on my Hub: 5 Steps To Creating Your Own Money Machine

  1. rathpichsokanha profile image60
    rathpichsokanhaposted 16 months ago

    Hi Hubbers,

    I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my Hub 5 Steps To Creating Your Own Money Machine (must be signed in to view). What can I do to improve? Thanks!

    1. theraggededge profile image100
      theraggededgeposted 16 months agoin reply to this

      Hi there,

      You don't say anything about what field of business or businesses you are talking about. It's vague and difficult to understand. What does your article offer that I couldn't find somewhere else?

      Your title is unrelated to your topic. "Steps To Creating Your Own Money Machine Online". You don't mention 'online' or the internet once. If I clicked on your article because I was interested in making money online, I'd be very disappointed to read that you are referring to something completely different.

      No images, you need at least one, correctly credited and legal to use.

      "You should", "You ought" - too many of them.

      Why are you using an author photo that clearly isn't you?

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