I'd like feedback on my Hub: Getting to the weight you want to be

  1. Frank Otto profile image59
    Frank Ottoposted 18 months ago

    Hi Hubbers,

    I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my Hub Getting to the weight you want to be (must be signed in to view). What can I do to improve? Thanks!

    1. theraggededge profile image98
      theraggededgeposted 18 months agoin reply to this

      Hi there,

      It's possible that your hub hasn't been approved because it adds nothing new to the huge amount of diet 'advice' that is already on HubPages and on the internet in general. HubPages isn't keen on weight loss as it's one the topics that tends to be spammy: https://hubpageshelp.com/standards/Lear … ted-topics

      There are some grammar issues that could be corrected by copying and pasting the text into an online app such as Grammarly. https://www.grammarly.com/

      You need to attribute the image and it must be legal-to-use: https://hubpageshelp.com/media/Learning … -image-use

      There is increasing evidence that the food pyramid is wrong and has been contributing to the obesity epidemic. If you are diabetic, the last thing you should be doing is basing your diet on carbohydrates. http://www.ditchthecarbs.com/why/food-pyramids/

      So the best suggestion I can give you is to either research the topic thoroughly and make a useful and informative article, or to write about something other than weight loss and diet all together.

      Hope that helps.