I'd like feedback on my Hub: Hot Topics in Globalization

  1. Nicholas Mohollen profile image68
    Nicholas Mohollenposted 12 months ago

    Hi Hubbers,

    I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my Hub Hot Topics in Globalization. What can I do to improve? Thanks!

    1. lions44 profile image99
      lions44posted 12 months agoin reply to this

      Just read it.  Break up your paragraphs a little. You're cramming too much info into one paragraph. Lots of info. So add subtitles and briefly touch on each topic.  So for your opening paragraph, just speak about globalization overall; define it. Then move on to a specific topic.  Make an outline
      For example:
        1. Opening paragraph
         2. Brexit
         3. Effects of global trade on workforce

      Try that.  Make it your own, but sometimes all you need are 3 or 4 sentences per paragraph.  It is a heavy topic, so spacing out the details helps.

 
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