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I'd like feedback on my Hub: 6 signs the trade labor market is in jeopardy

  1. Ryan Christopher profile image60
    Ryan Christopherposted 10 months ago

    Hi Hubbers,

    I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my Hub 6 signs the trade labor market is in jeopardy (must be signed in to view). What can I do to improve? Thanks!

    1. Sherry Hewins profile image96
      Sherry Hewinsposted 10 months agoin reply to this

      I think it's a good topic, but you have too many links in your hub. They do not seem necessary.

      It needs a little work on the formatting. You should use capital letters in the title: 6 Signs the Trade Labor Market is in Jeopardy. You need to break it into sections with bold headings.

      There are also a few odd phrases, for instance: "The instant gratifying mindset is far from skilled trade labor." Perhaps it could be something more like, "Skilled trade labor does not provide instant gratification."

      These seem like small things, but HP does care about them.

      I think it will only take a few tweaks and your hub should be published.

      1. Ryan Christopher profile image60
        Ryan Christopherposted 10 months agoin reply to this

        Great, TY So much!

  2. blueheron profile image98
    blueheronposted 10 months ago

    I think this is a great hub! They probably want a nice picture up top.

 
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