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I'd like feedback on my Hub: ~Literature FreeStyle Swiss:Why haven't I Given The

  1. terrance Smith profile image27
    terrance Smithposted 11 months ago

    Hi Hubbers,

    I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my Hub ~Literature FreeStyle Swiss:Why haven't I Given The Lyrical Chocolate Death Wish Kiss? (must be signed in to view). What can I do to improve? Thanks!

  2. FatFreddysCat profile image100
    FatFreddysCatposted 11 months ago

    I hate to be "that guy" but... I have no idea what that "article" is rambling about.
    The title is total gibberish and so is the text. Sorry.

    1. terrance Smith profile image27
      terrance Smithposted 11 months agoin reply to this

      Cool opinionated fact, thx i must pull up off the concrete

  3. Jodah profile image89
    Jodahposted 11 months ago

    Terrance, I know these are lyrics to rap songs you have written, but most others including HubPages staff won't have any idea. You need to explain at the start what a hub is about.

    1. terrance Smith profile image27
      terrance Smithposted 11 months agoin reply to this

      These are my most newest thoughts as a artist, i still love my job as an artist

    2. terrance Smith profile image27
      terrance Smithposted 11 months agoin reply to this

      Thx

  4. Marisa Wright profile image97
    Marisa Wrightposted 11 months ago

    First of all, this is not Literature, it's Creative Writing, so you've got it in the wrong category.   Hubs in Creative Writing are judged by more lenient criteria, so you've got a better chance if you fix the category.

    Secondly, thanks to Jodah for explaining what the Hub is about.  I had no way of knowing.  So an introductory line or two would be a good idea.

    Thirdly, your title is far too long.

    1. terrance Smith profile image27
      terrance Smithposted 11 months agoin reply to this

      Thx

    2. terrance Smith profile image27
      terrance Smithposted 11 months agoin reply to this

      My hub is currently published scoring a 55 for beginners

 
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