I'd like feedback on my Hub: The Definition of the word Ascension

  1. Nadine May profile image48
    Nadine Mayposted 15 months ago

    Hi Hubbers,

    I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my Hub The Definition of the word Ascension. What can I do to improve? Thanks!

  2. melbel profile image96
    melbelposted 15 months ago

    Two major things:

    I would get rid of the disclaimer at the top, "Please I do NOT refer in this article to the Ascended masters..."

    In addition, you link to a FREE ebook and then you link to the Amazon kindle version of the book. I'd get rid of the ebook link. It's very promotional and could be part of the problem in not passing QAP.

    Also, there is a grammatical error in your poll question.

    1. Nadine May profile image48
      Nadine Mayposted 15 months agoin reply to this

      OK I have changes my disclaimer somewhat and saw that I needed to remove the letter a in my poll question.  I thought that some readers might like to read the book on their kindle, which is clearly not for free but just in case I removed the link, only just to see if the article is now going through. Thanks for that