I'd like feedback on my article: THE ROOF IS NOT ON FIRE! YOU WILL BE ON...

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  1. BaruBB profile image76
    BaruBBposted 3 months ago

    Hi Hubbers,

    I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my article? What can I do to improve? Thanks!
    Here is my article: THE ROOF IS NOT ON FIRE! YOU WILL BE ON FIRE-WITH THIS DELICIOUS BANANA- CREAMY CHEESE- CHOCOLATE ROOF! (must be signed in to view)

  2. FatFreddysCat profile image97
    FatFreddysCatposted 3 months ago

    I'm not a recipe guy so I can't speak for the formatting/etc. of such things.

    However, I can tell you that you SHOULD NOT WRITE YOUR TITLE IN ALL CAPS BECAUSE IT LOOKS LIKE YOU'RE SHOUTING AT THE READER.

    That's rule numero uno.

  3. AliciaC profile image99
    AliciaCposted 3 months ago

    In addition to what FatFeddysCat has said, I have some other suggestions. I think you should simplify the title and reconsider some of the jokes. I don't think that joking about someone's level of alcoholism is really appropriate, for example. In addition, I would find the instructions more helpful if you spread out the photos and added details about each step under the relevant photo. You should also proofread the article in order to correct the English errors.

  4. theraggededge profile image97
    theraggededgeposted 3 months ago

    Hi,

    I don't understand the instructions. I need step-by-step photos.

    A piece of aluminium (sorry UK spelling), as in a sheet of metal? Or aluminium foil?

    How does it change from a rectangle banana cookie sandwich into a triangular shape?

    'Rest a bit'? How long? 10 minutes? An hour? Half a day?

    Where's the nutritional info? Storage? How long will it keep?

    It's "Bon appetit".

    Lots of work to do here if you want to get this published.

    Good luck.

  5. FatFreddysCat profile image97
    FatFreddysCatposted 3 months ago

    ....aaaaaaaaaand the OP has not changed a dang thing. (pffft)

  6. BaruBB profile image76
    BaruBBposted 2 months ago

    Hey everyone, thanks for your advice, I´ll definitely change it! I am on my travels these days so I can´t actually make it again to put more pictures and finish it. But coming soon thanks smile

 
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